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Thanks for the comments. For some reason, I didn't see your review until now - it must be a problem with the bot, as this page was actually created and deleted twice. Regarding your edit to the page, the only thing I really had an issue with was the deletion of the info about where the foyer and
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I've completed the review, and by my lights this article is at GA. Not passing it quite yet to give you a chance to look at the prose and detail tweaks I made and see if there are any you would object to. Otherwise, we're all set!
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For the most part, as I usually do, I'll go through and make minor prose tweaks myself to save us both time. If there are any changes you don't support, we can discuss here.
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Go ahead and restore that information - and if there's a source to back it up, we could mention that it's unusual, since that gives context for the reader.
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