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Wow, that's great. Thanks as always for your time, Paul MacD – and to you Yeepsi (for making this quick and painless ;) ... I might end up adding a pic after all – the tour programme cover, because it seems relevant on a couple of fronts – but I'll let you both know if I do. Big thanks again!
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Grand, thanks for that. I can update this now. Congrats again JG on another good article.
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