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This is a bit of a tangent, but a "surprise siege" doesn't seem to be consistent with how sieges generally tend to work, and the stub article over the battle gives no context. This isn't a GA pass/fail thing, but is there a word you could use besides "surprise"? Again, this is acceptable in a GA,
251:"He also made improvements to Gaston Hall, and began work on Riggs Library. and Richards improved the university's astronomical observatory," - There's several things wrong here grammatically, I'll let you sort out the ungrammatical sentence break how you want to. 188:
Superior is basically what it sounds like. It's just the name of the person in charge of a given institution, if that institution's head doesn't have a different title. So, it's generally used for smaller institutions, rather than colleges, churches, etc.
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or not. The previous couple paragraphs are about his relations to notable relatives, which makes sense but I'm not sure about the table of just names with no context here, especially when a lot of these figures aren't particularly important.
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The citations all appear to be from reliable sources, and the images are all public domain in the US. There's some copy edit issues, and a term whose meaning isn't clear, but overall this is really close to GA-status.
269:"His presidency came to an end on July 3, 1898, after experiencing worsening health for two years, and was succeeded by John D. Whitney" - Maybe "and he" in the last clause, it feels awkward as is. 58: 91: 81: 137: 133: 63: 118: 110: 86: 167: 37:
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332:- Should ref 21, the "Letter from the Rector" have some sort of parameter indicating that it's from the Internet Archive? 126: 17: 226: 354:
Ref 19 is the Woodstock Letters reference. There is no individual author attributed to the article.
184:- You state that made the superior of a Jesuit retreat center, what's the rank of superior signify? 431: 393: 161: 103: 234:
Unfortunately, I think you're right. That table took a while to make, but I've removed it.
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You mention superior again, but we still aren't informed of what this role signifies.
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There's a genealogical table here. I'm not sure if this is consistent with
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Ref 19, the Bender book, needs an author parameter in the citation.
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It looks like you were referring to ref 18. I've fixed it.
145: 114: 8: 315:Hopefully my above comment clarified a bit. 41: 72: 44: 7: 207:so this is just more of a question. 33:The following discussion is closed. 288:Anti-Catholicism in the Ivy League 24: 443:The discussion above is closed. 1: 426:- Passing for GA status now. 211:Removed the word "surprise". 410:Thank you for your review. 462: 436:00:04, 8 March 2020 (UTC) 419:14:33, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 398:05:02, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 376:14:35, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 363:14:33, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 345:14:31, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 324:14:30, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 303:14:30, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 282:14:29, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 264:14:29, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 243:14:27, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 220:14:25, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 198:14:24, 7 March 2020 (UTC) 172:15:50, 6 March 2020 (UTC) 445:Please do not modify it. 35:Please do not modify it. 388:, placing on hold now. 18:Talk:J. Havens Richards 36: 100: 99: 34: 453: 415: 409: 372: 359: 341: 320: 299: 278: 260: 239: 216: 194: 150: 141: 122: 54:Copyvio detector 42: 461: 460: 456: 455: 454: 452: 451: 450: 449: 448: 413: 403: 370: 357: 339: 318: 297: 276: 258: 255:Cleaned it up. 237: 227:WP:NOTGENEALOGY 214: 192: 179: 131: 108: 102: 96: 68: 39: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 459: 457: 442: 441: 440: 439: 438: 381: 380: 379: 378: 348: 347: 327: 326: 306: 305: 285: 284: 267: 266: 246: 245: 223: 222: 201: 200: 178: 175: 151: 98: 97: 95: 94: 89: 84: 78: 75: 74: 70: 69: 67: 66: 64:External links 61: 56: 50: 47: 46: 40: 31: 30: 28: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 458: 446: 437: 433: 429: 425: 422: 421: 420: 417: 416: 407: 402: 401: 400: 399: 395: 391: 387: 377: 374: 373: 366: 365: 364: 361: 360: 353: 352: 351: 346: 343: 342: 335: 334: 333: 331: 325: 322: 321: 314: 313: 312: 310: 304: 301: 300: 293: 292: 291: 289: 283: 280: 279: 272: 271: 270: 265: 262: 261: 254: 253: 252: 250: 244: 241: 240: 233: 232: 231: 228: 221: 218: 217: 210: 209: 208: 205: 199: 196: 195: 187: 186: 185: 183: 176: 174: 173: 169: 166: 163: 159: 156: 152: 149: 148: 144: 139: 135: 130: 129: 125: 120: 116: 112: 107: 106: 93: 90: 88: 85: 83: 80: 79: 77: 76: 71: 65: 62: 60: 57: 55: 52: 51: 49: 48: 43: 38: 26: 19: 444: 412: 382: 369: 356: 349: 338: 329: 328: 317: 308: 307: 296: 287: 286: 275: 268: 257: 249:Construction 248: 247: 236: 224: 213: 203: 202: 191: 181: 180: 164: 154: 153: 146: 142: 128:Article talk 127: 123: 104: 101: 92:Instructions 32: 309:Later years 115:visual edit 330:References 59:Authorship 45:GA toolbox 155:Reviewer: 82:Templates 73:Reviewing 27:GA Review 428:Hog Farm 424:Ergo Sum 414:Ergo Sum 406:Hog Farm 390:Hog Farm 386:Ergo Sum 371:Ergo Sum 358:Ergo Sum 340:Ergo Sum 319:Ergo Sum 298:Ergo Sum 277:Ergo Sum 259:Ergo Sum 238:Ergo Sum 215:Ergo Sum 204:Ancestry 193:Ergo Sum 177:Comments 168:contribs 158:Hog Farm 87:Criteria 294:Fixed. 138:history 119:history 105:Article 336:Done. 273:Done. 147:Watch 16:< 432:talk 394:talk 182:Lead 162:talk 134:edit 111:edit 434:) 396:) 170:) 136:| 117:| 113:| 430:( 408:: 404:@ 392:( 165:· 160:( 143:· 140:) 132:( 124:· 121:) 109:(

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