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477: 457: 437: 397: 372: 349: 333: 308: 292: 276: 245: 209: 42: 685: 603: 574: 540: 497:! Well done on this well-written article. It pretty much meets all the criteria. I have a couple of minor comments listed below, and it would be better if there were at least one more image, but aside from that it's ready to be promoted to GA. 47: 286: 80: 70: 427: 239: 126: 166:
I'll take this one on. From a cursory initial reading it looks pretty good, and I don't think much will be required to get it up to GA standard.
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The article would benefit from more material on Rainwater's personal life, but perhaps not in a section titled "Manhattan project"
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He's listed as a member of the Optical Society, but this is not mentioned in the article
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A. Prose is clear and concise, without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
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Heart attack, apparently. Found that buried far down in one of the sources.
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I have promoted the article to GA based on your improvements. Well done.
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No idea, I'm afraid. I have noted his poor health in later life.
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Why was it unusual for Rainwater to go to Columbia?
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