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She had to be sunk or scrapped, which is why I used weaker language like "in accordance" rather than "required". Happy to take suggestions if you have any.--
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The paragraph which begins with "During the war Mutsu saw limited action" is currently unreferenced
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Yeah, but it's very much a museum (albeit one promoting some dodgy history), and not a shrine.
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