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Other than that, I think this is good to go. Once those tweaks are made, I'll happily promote this to GA. Incidentally I agree with your choice not to include the sinking postcard image in the article as the licensing is evidenced in the description.
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Description: Is there anyway to remove the two zeros from the end of the converted distance of the beam length, or is this stuck with the convert template?
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I believe the article meets all the criteria for GA, and therefore it's a pass. Good job.
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I'll give this a review now and add points below as I come across them.
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Could also do with some trunking to remove the year from the link to
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The Port Arthur link in the lead is linking to a disambig page.
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Talk:Japanese battleship Yashima
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12:21, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
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12:21, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Battle of Port Arthur
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17:44, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Russian cruiser Boyarin (1901)
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16:46, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

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