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I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise
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Is there an article on the historical period that could be piped to? I like the nav template at the bottom of the article - is there a main article for that template? (Sorry, we just finished unloading and are back on the road (I'm out with my husband the truck driver these last few weeks, so typing
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May I just say that this is a case where the MOS is an ass. It is going to get people confused that we don't know what we're talking about but... I stopped fighting the MOS (even when its stupid) a while back. It really does make folks think we can't hire editors when this sort of pseudo-typo pops
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Yep, just waiting on the book, which I'm flexible on, if it takes a bit more time than 7 days, it's not a crisis. And this is an example of why I own so many books - I tend to just try to buy most books for wikipedia research... that way I have them forever. Or I copy the relevant parts (I have
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Not to blacken my own teapot, but I was blocked long ago for contesting one such confusing MoS prescription. Like you, I've long since given up such 'fights', and simply abide the decisions that 'MoS Wikipedians' decide...this being an example.
212:? That's the closest thing to an appropriate catch-all 'China' article for the time period that I can think of (or find). Once again, I'm much obliged for your review, especially considering the 'unusual' circumstances of its undertaking!
790:"This was the first serious case of unilateral action by the Japanese military." - first serious case in the lead up to the Jinan incident or first serious case in the whole of Japan's involvement in China in the 1920s and 1930s?
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in a semi truck while bouncing is sometimes... interesting. I did the review while waiting to be unloaded...) Otherwise, yeah, probably an unpiped "China" is best. Btw... the article was quite good... very little needed fixing.
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I am going to sort this, but it will take me a few days, as I need to retrieve a book from the library to add a citation...but I assure you that I will meet the relevant deadline.
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if it takes a few days over the 7 to get the library book, no worries, just let me know. I’m very familiar with how sometimes something simple can take forever with a library...
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mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on.
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