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This article is one in a series, and most don't have anything about reception, because when the work was first performed there wasn't much (only very few even mentioned), the centuries afterwards cared more about his secular works and the oratorios, and from the 20th century, it has been frequently
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I understand the concerns about using the Bach
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I agree. Based on the sources available, I think the article now contains a sufficient amount of analysis/reception. If more sources can be found, then perhaps this article could become more "comprehensive," but that is an FA requirement, not GA. Passing.
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Hmmm... yes, I plan on removing the tags after offering my thoughts (see below). If consensus can be built that the sourcing/reception is sufficient, then I see no problem in promoting this article. Go ahead and respond to any outstanding items.
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Thanks for looking again. I was out all day, and behind on many things, so it will take a day or two to respond. Francis who found lack of references is blocked for several weeks, so we can't work anything out. I think if
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I haven't checked all of the sources in this section yet, because I think the prose needs to be cleaned up first. Let me know if you need any assistance in copy-editing. More to come.
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appears to be reliable in this regard. I don't see a reason for a blanket prohibition of any sourcing from this site, but caution is advised.
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