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Starting with 'in 201x' makes the section look like a list. You can reword it a bit and combine the events in 2013–15 into one para to make it look more interesting. The events need not be related, like the revenue increase and the mugshot thing, but you can connect them as events happening 'a year
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The lead could be expanded by a few more lines to include some more important details from Real life history section like the 10% revenue increase.
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Sony has now been linked. I didn't want to include a precise figure about
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restaurant's logo was the subject of a lawsuit brought by
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Okay then, everything looks good. Ready for promotion. Cheers,
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