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Although numerous revisions had to be made in order for me to pass this article as GA, I am satisfied by it and believe that it has promise as an A-class article through WikiProject
Military history's review process. Thank you for your contributions to Knowledge (XXG), and good luck in the future!
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Check for grammar mistakes/word choice issues throughout the second half of this section. Re-reading the section might be a good idea, and then you can make changes to anything that sounds awkward (hopefully none of my changes messed up anything, either!)
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Beginning in June 1784, Congress made him finally for a period of four and a half months to draw up the certificates for members of his former regiment.
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Each of these sentences leaves out important info on exactly what the subject did.
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Re-worded a bit and simplified. Tell me how you think it sounds now.
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