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Failing this article because I don't think that it was sufficiently prepared for being nominated to be a Good Article. There are issues with sourcing, comprehensiveness and referencing. I'm sure there must be more info than there currently is. This article does not satisfy the criteria at the present
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The screenshot of Screenshot of LilyPond running on Linux needs to be on the left and placed at the top of the Design section, as it is currently defaulting to under the info box
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I don't see the point of having one sentence sub sections for Version 1.0 and Version 2.0. Just add these to the end of the History section para.
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Another scorewriter with comparable features to LilyPond is SCORE, but SCORE relies on manual positioning more than Lilypond does. → Unsourced
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You could use the {{hlist|}} for the language in the info box: {{hlist|English|Dutch|French|German|Hungarian|Italian|Japanese|Spanish}}
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Looking at the history of the article, I don't really think you've done must to improve it. There are a handful of minor changes.
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One benefit of this is that more than one language can be included in the same source file. → Unsourced
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The lead really isn't giving a broad enough overview of the rest of the article, it's too short.
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stage. It needs a lot of work, more than I believe is worth putting on hold for 7 days for.  —
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I'd add a hatnote to the top of the article saying {{Distinguish|Lily Pond}}
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Try to avoid single sentence/line paragraphs. There are a lot of them.
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There are inconsistencies in the date formatting in the references.
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You don't need to say "; 20 years ago" in the info box
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Is ref 14 supposed to have a red link for the name?
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07:55, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
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19:43, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
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21:09, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
Quite a few dead links
Some dablinks
Calvin999
08:43, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

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