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Mongols in 1210."; "The Mongols returned the next year and Zhongdu, the capital of the Jin, was besieged in 1213"; etc)
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Turnbull"). Translations fall under copyright.
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Looking excellent once again! Let me (if I may) just add a few things that I think need slight clarification.
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which could burn a soldier to death, even if he survives the initial blast
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