505:, just coming back to this review. I'm happy to make a few copyedits once all the above has been addressed. Also, perhaps cleanup the personal life section? The quote about her sexuality - I don't think that's relevant or adds anything here (Knowledge is not gossip!). I would perhaps remove the subheading "Relationships" as you address legal issues here too. Thanks.
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Trillfendi, apologies but I'm going to fail this GA for now. Let me know when you're ready to renominate and I'll review it again. Thank you!
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Update - additional comments may come soon before wrapping this up. I haven't forgotten about this review. Thanks,
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