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This line can sound confusing, since the details of the common code is not elaborated on in the article and since the previous line discusses imperial naturalisation in the context of authorisation. I would suggest re-phrasing the line a bit and including the numbered parts adopted in 1923 and in
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This isn't verifiable from its in-line citation. McMillan & Hood 2016 (p. 4.) appears to be the citation that should be used for it. The line should also specify that it was French and German immigrants who lobbied the government and were successful in getting citizenship.
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Horserice, I'll take up the review for this nomination and present it to you in some time. I hope my feedback will be useful to you and that I get to learn something new in the process.
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Thanks for taking the time to review! I've addressed the issues you brought up point by point below.
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I just changed that to refer to "this law". I think that should work?
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