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article that orders them like a table or list. Some have come across better than others. Generally by mixing in interesting facts and omitting some more boring items. I'll take another look at this and ponder. Items have also been organised as bright stars/double stars/variable stars
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I did some editing on that section, which hopefully improved things. The table might fit into the bright stars sub-section that I created. Perhaps still a daunting block of text. I suggested earlier simplifying some of the error ranges, but wasn't sure what else to do.
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citations and they all have an identification number in the template. This is translated into a link to the entry for that star in the VizieR database, which shows after the conventional journal citation. The database is fixed, a copy of
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The references for Brown, A. G. A.; et al appear to be identical, but they're not. They need to be identifiable and differentiated (using the star's identification number, for instance). The retrieval dates needs to be added
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The article looks ready to pass now. I added an external link to Bayer's star maps at the Linda Hall
Library, Sagitta is easily found. Great work, Casliber, and thanks for helping make the review a pleasure to do.
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I removed it - it adds nothing over the infobox image. Constellation articles often get loaded with images like these so we end up with duplicates etc.
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An amateur polymath - very few people wrote about origins of star names, which meant that Allen's work has been very widely cited and publicised
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Wilhelm Argelander, Heis and John Flamsteed?
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295:The red giant Gamma Sagittae…
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1393:= absolute magnitude (Mv)
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787:Sagitta - white background
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842:(occurs more than once).
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1084:List of stars in Sagitta
1055:List of stars in Sagitta
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743:Who was Eugène Delporte?
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1562:Checking for more....
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104:visual edit
1642:18 October
1602:Lithopsian
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1398:Dist. (ly)
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199:Assessment
48:Authorship
34:GA toolbox
1499:Cas Liber
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257:magnitude
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144:Reviewer:
71:Templates
62:Reviewing
27:GA Review
1646:Consider
1587:cite DR2
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268:delinked
238:contribs
189:contribs
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1671:Passing
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1229:δ Sge B
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1184:δ Sge A
851:removed
454:History
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1294:−1.39
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1164:K5III
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