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for a guideline on how to write an effective plot. It would likely be narrowed to about 400 words and in this case, it's pretty typical to split a major television series into a "List of X Episodes" list, which is likely to help here, and where additional plot details may be fleshed
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for some ideas how to write the lead of the article; the lead should adequately summarize the entire content of the piece, and in the case of a television show, it's typical to note major stars, a sentence or two about the plot, and some detail about she show's production and
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A section for casting, which would likely list the major actors in the series and the decisions that went into casting them. Not necessarily too much detail about the characters themselves, but a real-world look at the people who were in the
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from Mumbai who lives her life to the fullest, enjoy hanging out with her friend's.") It's clear in some cases the article is in need of a close copy-edit by an
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the article. For future reference and as advice for other would-be nominators, I will offer some suggestions here for how it can be improved. —
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A section for background, where we understand who ordered and bankrolled the show, the social context of when it began and who inspired it.
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