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The article is illustrated by relevant images that are marked as being licensed in the public domain. However, the positioning of the images of the "Double-Duty Finger Guild of
Crocker-Wheeler Company, department for the blind auxiliary factory and training center" and "Crocker-Wheeler blind workers
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As the source dates from 1914, I can understand the difficulty. As writes, the electric motor industry was in its infancy into the early twentieth century. According to , "They were the pioneer manufacturers of small electric motors". I suggest that wording like that.
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training to tape electric motor armature coils at the Double-Duty Finger Guild" are such that they do not align with the gallery at some resolutions. I suggest looking to see if both the images are needed and if so considering adding them to the gallery.
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This looks a very interesting article about a lesser known inventor from the United States. His work with visually impaired veterans seems particularly of note. I wonder if this could be an interesting
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Charles G Curtis and Francis B Crocker 1886 the C & C Electric Motor Co which produced first electric motor industry as a commercial business organized Crocker Wheeler Company 1888.
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct; and
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Well done for another informative and well-constructed article. Please ping me when you are ready for me to look again.
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Thanks for taking up review. It was a Did You Know in 2017 with over 4,000 views for the inventor of the electric fan.--
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