425:"Nikolaidou and Kokkinidou refer to her "continuous scholarly effort, broad intellectual perspective, social contribution and democratic sensitivity" and the innovative nature of her approach to ancient artefacts, particularly iconography on pottery, by which she "moved beyond the images to real people, their everyday life, attitudes and ideologies"" how does this help? again I ask why it matters what those two in particular say, maybe add a qualifier
265:"along with her husband, other archaeologists, and museum employees and their families" perhaps just condense all of those to a few words like "other Greeks", "other archeologists" or something comparable"? - reformatted slightly as I think it's an important point that even families of lower-level museum employees were involved, not just the curators.
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There are a couple things in the article that seem a little promotional... Things like "Her contributions to Greek archaeology and museology have often been overlooked due to the focus on prominent male archaeologists over the 'invisible service' of
Karouzou's museum curation" just seem a little too
378:, I've now had a chance to go through your comments properly! I've tried to edit the page in accordance with them - where this hasn't been possible or some explanation is needed I've added it by the relevant comment above. I hope this looks OK, please do let me know if more is still needed!
277:"political dissident" Why was she labelled a dissident? We've seen no indication she was even remotely politically active? - probably for her liberal political views rather than any actual political activities as such, have tried to make this clearer. Not much detail on this in sources.
702:, Yeah, a redirect would be helpful. However, that is not a problem to hold up the promotion of this article to GA. It is currently well written, well referenced, reasonably comprehensive, contains no visible copyvio, and I am happy to promote to ga
589:, here’s a suggestion - you can stop trying to use “fake bad English”, like omitting action verbs or using wrong tense, since you were already quite articulate on your user page in discussing your username in pristine English
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Marianna Nikolaidou and Dimitra Kokkinidouas" add who they are? (Historians, authors, something else? Why do we care what they say, what makes it worth quoting")
255:"she described this cataloguing work, which she had also performed at Epidaurus and Eretria, as 'invisible service'." maybe rephrase? This sentences loses focus a little bit, maybe trim down/break up
280:"Unable to carry out her research" research on what? After retirement? - she retired from her museum position but was still (trying to) work on archaeological material, cf. invited scholarships.
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I have edited to clarify that the packing up of the exhibits happened when the
Italian army invaded in 1940, while the Karouzous' resignation occurred on the German invasion/occupation in '41.
336:, Do you have an update on when you think you will be able to get to these comments? I'm willing to be flexible with timing, but I need to know you're planning to come back an address them.
452:! I've addressed those comments too (I hope), except for the CS1 maints which for some reason I can't see in any viewing mode. If you don't mind fixing them that would be really helpful!
271:"responsible for reinstalling the museum collections" responsible by themselves or just involved? - responsible as in 'in charge of', presumably other employees would have assisted.
628:, Thank you, and I think It's just one more: could you mention her being described as "perhaps the most important woman in Greek archaeology" in the body of the article as well?
359:, I'm certainly planning to address them, just have not yet had a chance to do so. Will do it later this week if I can, definitely this month if not. Thanks for your patience!
234:"rather than directing high-profile excavations, they nonetheless carried out highly significant work on museum collections" how is the latter part relevant to the article?
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I've made some light c/edits, feel free to disagree with me on any/all of my edits or comments. Overall, very nice work, but needs to be polished somewhat.
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CS1 maints on the sources should be cleaned up - I'm not totally clear what this is referring to as I can't see any error messages on the citations?
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were the artefacts previously not known to exist? - they would presumably have been known when excavated but not properly recorded in the museum.
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do this all by herself, or did she direct it? - sources don't mention if she had others helping her but she was certainly primarily responsible.
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The sentences can read as very convoluted, with perhaps an abundance of semicolons. I'd recommend breaking some of that into multiple sentences.
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much like an essay to me... Maybe support statements about her impact with more quotes from people who are qualified to make such statements
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Do you see where it says "CS1 maint: date format" after the citations in green? That's a CS1 maint. I can fix them if you don't see them.
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