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The last sentence in the first lead paragraph states that "the ultimate fate of two variants is still unknown". However later in the article it states that Tomas Rokicki solved one of these, ".. leaving only {1,0,4,2,0,1,5} unsolved".
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Another point, the article's title is "Paterson's worms" with a lower case for the "w". There is a lack of consistency in the article as to whether "worms" should be capitalised.
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I will be reviewing the article over the next few days. I should point out that this is my first Good Article review so the views of other people will be welcome.
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As mentioned above, the first sentence in the second lead paragraph is unsatisfactory ".. described by Beeler in June 1973 MIT AI Memo #290: "Paterson's Worm".
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Brian Hayes. "Computing Science: In Search of the Optimal Scumsucking Bottomfeeder". American Scientist Vol. 91, No. 5 (SEPTEMBER-OCTOBER 2003), pp. 392-396
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Can someone more knowledgeable on this subject make a quick edit to this page which states the solutions of the recently solved worms (infinite or death).
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On first reading the article I see no basic problems. However the lead section seems to introduce matter that is not included in the main article. See
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after the link to keep me from modifying it, if I keep adding bad data, but formatting bugs should be reported instead. Alternatively, you can add
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I've put the first of the sources in. I haven't got access to the full version of the Brian Hayes source so that PDF would definitely be helpful.
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The section "Rules" does not have a citation, though, having looked at the other references, I see they mostly explain the rules quite clearly.
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Thanks for the suggestions and the review. I've acted on all your points and I think they definitely make the article better. Cheers!
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Which scale (long or short scale) is used throughout this article? For instance, it isn't clear whether a trillion specifies
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for more information. In particular, the sentence "described by Beeler in June 1973 MIT AI Memo #290" means little to me.
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to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the
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to keep me off the page altogether, but should be used as a last resort. I made the following changes:
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The "Fossilized worm tracks." image looks ugly on the left. I suggest it goes on the right.
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Article - Certain species of prehistoric worms fed upon sediment at the bottom of ponds.
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Source - Certain prehistoric worms fed on sediment in the mud at the bottom of ponds.
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I have reworded that sentence. I don't see any other obvious too-close paraphrases.
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Is the coverage of the topic sufficiently in depth to meet the GA criteria such as
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Much of the "History" section is close paraphrased from its source. For example:
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Here are some preliminary comments, and by the way, I like the animation.
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Would it be more logical to have the history section at the beginning?
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Thank you for those changes. A few other points have occurred to me:
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Unfortunately I have not been able to find any more info about it.
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When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the
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http://wso.williams.edu/~bchaffin/patersons_worms/index.htm
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I have just added archive links to one external link on
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I'm not sure. None of the sources I've seen mention it.
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Do Patterson's worms have any practical applications?
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