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Talk:Patsy Fagan/GA1

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I've hidden this as no reliable source, and the same for highest break and number of centuries. I know you've raised the issue around sources with Lee Vilenski, and I'll be looking to contribute to the discussion.
186:"developed a case of the yips" I know youm have a wikilink here, but might be better to say "psychological problem which affected his playing" (or something like that) in the lead? 80: 391:
Thank you for taking on the review and for your constructive comments. I hope I've addressed them but please let me know about anything else that is required. Regards,
70: 47: 212:"In the 1975 English Amateur Championship" Given that you've just talked about billiards, you should make it clear you're talking about snooker again. 126: 75: 122: 52: 107: 156: 99: 396: 359: 331: 310: 283: 256: 229: 203: 370:
A very well sourced article on an interesting character. Placing on hold until my few concerns are dealt with
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This article looks in really good shape, so I've only got a few minor quibbles before promoting:
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Shame there's no picture, but I've done a quick search and can't find a free one
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Cites should generally come after a mark of punctuation.
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What is the cite for career winnings in the infobox?
8: 30: 61: 33: 7: 322:Agreed. Especially as he appears on 251:- let me know if I've missed any. 24: 344: 297: 269: 242: 216: 190: 1: 413:Happy to promote - congrats! 278:- is this suitable coverage? 443: 423:14:46, 26 May 2020 (UTC) 401:23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 380:20:53, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 364:23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 336:23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 315:23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 288:23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 261:23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 234:23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 208:23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 176:20:36, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 161:20:36, 25 May 2020 (UTC) 324:Pin-up (disambiguation) 166:I'll take this one 89: 88: 434: 412: 390: 352: 348: 347: 305: 301: 300: 277: 273: 272: 250: 246: 245: 224: 220: 219: 198: 194: 193: 139: 130: 111: 43:Copyvio detector 31: 18:Talk:Patsy Fagan 442: 441: 437: 436: 435: 433: 432: 431: 409:BennyOnTheLoose 406: 393:BennyOnTheLoose 384: 356:BennyOnTheLoose 345: 343: 328:BennyOnTheLoose 307:BennyOnTheLoose 298: 296: 280:BennyOnTheLoose 270: 268: 253:BennyOnTheLoose 243: 241: 226:BennyOnTheLoose 217: 215: 200:BennyOnTheLoose 191: 189: 120: 97: 91: 85: 57: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 440: 438: 430: 429: 428: 427: 426: 425: 367: 366: 341: 338: 320: 317: 294: 290: 266: 263: 239: 236: 213: 210: 187: 183: 182: 165: 140: 87: 86: 84: 83: 78: 73: 67: 64: 63: 59: 58: 56: 55: 53:External links 50: 45: 39: 36: 35: 28: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 439: 424: 420: 416: 410: 404: 403: 402: 398: 394: 388: 383: 382: 381: 377: 373: 369: 368: 365: 361: 357: 351: 342: 339: 337: 333: 329: 325: 321: 318: 316: 312: 308: 304: 295: 291: 289: 285: 281: 276: 267: 264: 262: 258: 254: 249: 240: 237: 235: 231: 227: 223: 214: 211: 209: 205: 201: 197: 188: 185: 184: 180: 179: 178: 177: 173: 169: 163: 162: 158: 155: 152: 148: 145: 141: 138: 137: 133: 128: 124: 119: 118: 114: 109: 105: 101: 96: 95: 82: 79: 77: 74: 72: 69: 68: 66: 65: 60: 54: 51: 49: 46: 44: 41: 40: 38: 37: 32: 26: 19: 349: 302: 274: 247: 221: 195: 164: 153: 143: 142: 135: 131: 117:Article talk 116: 112: 93: 90: 81:Instructions 104:visual edit 48:Authorship 34:GA toolbox 144:Reviewer: 71:Templates 62:Reviewing 27:GA Review 157:contribs 76:Criteria 415:Cavie78 405:Thanks 387:Cavie78 372:Cavie78 168:Cavie78 147:Cavie78 127:history 108:history 94:Article 136:Watch 16:< 419:talk 397:talk 376:talk 360:talk 350:Done 332:talk 311:talk 303:Done 284:talk 275:Done 257:talk 248:Done 230:talk 222:Done 204:talk 196:Done 172:talk 151:talk 123:edit 100:edit 421:) 399:) 378:) 362:) 334:) 326:. 313:) 286:) 259:) 232:) 206:) 174:) 159:) 125:| 106:| 102:| 417:( 411:: 407:@ 395:( 389:: 385:@ 374:( 358:( 330:( 309:( 282:( 255:( 228:( 202:( 170:( 154:· 149:( 132:· 129:) 121:( 113:· 110:) 98:(

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