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This is a solid article; it is well-written, comprehensive and the prose generally flows well. The references are also all in check and the images are fine. I've done some minor formatting so hope that's OK. Once all of the above are out of the way I'll be happy to promote this.
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Thousand Year Door won "Role Playing Game of the Year" at the 2005 Interactive Achievement Awards") to the end of the newly-merged paragraph
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Sorry, I must have misread the paragraphs in the reception section. Thanks for addressing them quickly, by all means this let's promote this.
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Every secondary source keeps it simple and speaks of XP. Additionally, there's a little "known in-game as Star Points, or SP" in there, too.
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Apologies for the delay. I've had a manic past few days with studying. I'll finish the review tomorrow. ♦
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is still awarded for defeating enemies" - I thought experience points in these games were known as SP?
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