941:
571:
403:
379:
213:
460:
424:
347:
318:
297:
239:
42:
546:
513:
945:
917:
1229:
murdered, why there's only a few sentences in there. I mean, it's ethnic cleansing; surely there is much more information about possible planning, incitement, media attention, execution, punishment afterward (or lack thereof) for killers, et cetera. Until such information achieves due weight, I couldn't possibly sign off on GA status.
446:
p201 ought to be used in this article, "While
Bangladesh, Pakistan, UNHCR and various scholars contend that the Biharis are not refuges in the strict sense of the 1951 convention researchers such as Sen argue the Pakistan's unilateral denationalisation of the Bihari minority and its refusal to allow
1228:
after it?); it's a point I tried to address in a minor way by tweaking the lead. And b. it should more clearly present evidence of persecution. I find that the phrasing and set-up of the "nationality issue" is not very clear, and I am still surprised that, if so many thousands of people were
586:
Sorry, but I have to fail the article at this time. No improvements have been made since the suggestions by Drimes, please follow his suggestions and wait till the guild of copyeditors have gone through the article before nominating it again.
631:
I am trying to fix the issues related to improvement. But the edit history of the article can show whether it is stable or not. I was a bit busy at job, but will try to get it elevated to GA. Further guidance for improvement is expected.
612:. Neutrality was excesssively discussed by the most active editors of the article, an RfC was also run. The discussion has lead to final stability of the article, although some issues arise sometimes, the article is neutral overall.
876:
I don't know this Sen too. There is no clarification available, I had gone through a number of searches for Sen. What about redacting the terms? Getting it to "Some researchers...." only? What about other attributes?
672:
Please incorporate the sources and content I have suggested in the review, although you think the article is stable it does not appear to be, but I am taking my time on the review in the hope that it will stabilize.
47:
793:
I will finish the improvements tomorrow, will try to get it as early as possible to GA. There have been 2 months on the DYK nomination. The promotion of GA may get it to DYK too. Can you get a review tommorrow?
913:
Right, I have formated all the refs, none were formated correctly. I have added a CN tag, and a few RS tags. I also did some minor copyedits and removed some duplications, you owe me a beer or several
126:
451:
p101 "The supreme court of
Bangladesh had to confirm that Biharis are citizens of Bangladesh and the mere fact that a person opts to migrate to another country cannot take away his citizenship"
628:
There are no images which I could find appropriate or suitable for inclusion. The events unfortunately did not get significant media coverage/attention. Anyway, no images are there currently.
122:
338:, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
107:
52:
1123:
335:
99:
447:
a broad right of return may be interpreted as acts of persecution sufficient to establish refugee status" The lede should also mention the legal status of these people, from
1294:? Wtf? He said: "I will look for sources", there was only 1a or copy-editing left, then how the nomination failed? Ludicrous. Wait for the guild to copy-edit the article.
622:
the article. Anyway, they are not occuring. The article is stable. You were the editor closing the RfC, which marked the article as neutral, removing the redundant tags.
222:
1013:
It will pass today, I had no internet. Main issues are resolved, it is stable. Told you to have a look on the attributes. The references will be fixed within 5 min.
264:
80:
1224:
I'll rehash a point from the earlier DYK nomination: I think the article should a. define more clearly what "persecution" is being talked about (during the war or
1247:
Having reread the article yesterday before getting langers and having a tantrum I had come to the same conclusions, I will be looking for sources later today.
70:
1095:
I have put the text in the aftermath section. Is it good there? Otherwise move it. Anyway, there are no tags left related to references. Can expect strike?
530:
115:
17:
268:
260:
252:
899:
I am doing some copyediting, and the way the sources are cited seem to vary, I will likly change the entire format of citations later today.
156:
92:
559:
167:
1316:
The concern is not only with the copyedit. As Drmies pointed out, the article lacks due information about the actual persecution.--
256:
434:
173:
75:
1126:. The Guild seems very busy. Yunshui improved it extensively, see his edits in the article. You also did some copy-edits, and
650:
There are 2,818 articles currently in the backlog of the Guild. It may take time to get it further improved bu copy-editing.
356:
522:
858:"Some researchers like Sen"? Sen who? Needs to be clarified as someone will without a doubt stick a who tag there.
534:
327:
1252:
1068:
1036:
1003:
998:
So five days after I tagged some stuff it remains unresolved, this review really cannot be held for much longer.
926:
904:
863:
736:
678:
331:
248:
150:
820:
attributes. Secondly, Isn't the article stable? The conflicts seem to have been stopped. Any hope for attribute
953:
526:
412:
282:
1322:
1307:
1274:
1256:
1238:
1219:
1199:
1173:
1143:
1108:
1090:
1072:
1058:
1040:
1026:
1007:
986:
957:
930:
908:
890:
867:
837:
807:
788:
758:
740:
722:
700:
682:
663:
645:
473:
388:
160:
229:
1248:
1204:
1064:
1032:
999:
922:
900:
859:
732:
674:
146:
970:
949:
555:
305:. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
442:
It took me a matter of minutes to find sources which disputes various things in the article,
1301:
1268:
1234:
1213:
1193:
1169:
1137:
1102:
1084:
1052:
1020:
980:
884:
831:
801:
782:
752:
716:
694:
657:
639:
499:
495:
503:
438:: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
306:
190:
177:
1130:
did too. I think 1a can go ahead with a tick too? There is huge backlog in the guild.
1317:
1261:
Cool up DS! I will also try to get the article improved further as Drmies suggested.
619:
1164:
Drive-by comment: even the lead isn't up to GA snuff. I'll prove it in a few edits.
1119:
603:
1296:
1263:
1230:
1208:
1188:
1165:
1132:
1127:
1097:
1079:
1047:
1015:
975:
879:
826:
796:
777:
747:
711:
689:
652:
634:
731:
this as it is a copyvio, sorry, I thought I had it in quation marks above.
411:. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see
896:
472:: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing
618:
The edit-wars were once common, becausing some editors intended to
479:
The article is far from stable with edit wars occurring regularly.
969:
Alright, I am fixing the RS and CN tags. Thanks for the refs
606:. I have referred it to the Guild too, for more improvements.
1182:
Thanks for the copy-edits anyway, it will aid in attribute
771:
attribute? I am now trying to get a tick for the attribute
444:
764:
728:
134:
103:
1118:. I am fed up of 1a. It was recently copy-edited by
767:. You can also help here. Now are we finished with
940:The quote given above is visible in Google Books
223:understandable to an appropriately broad audience
1063:Cool, no need to paraphrase it BTW, I wrote it.
895:It is Sumit Sen, you can learn all about him
745:Oops yeah. I am giving it a finishing touch.
8:
812:A glance needed at developments related to
30:
18:Talk:Persecution of Biharis in Bangladesh
183:
61:
33:
7:
914:
225:; spelling and grammar are correct.
705:I have added the text suggested at
221:. the prose is clear, concise, and
545:
512:
24:
602:. It was recently copy-edited by
228:I would recommend posting to the
1045:Of course I am going to add it.
915:
763:I have tried close paraphrasing
569:
544:
511:
458:
422:
401:
377:
345:
316:
295:
237:
211:
176:for what the criteria are, and
336:could reasonably be challenged
1:
531:valid non-free use rationales
449:Minority Rights in South Asia
570:
459:
423:
402:
378:
346:
317:
296:
238:
212:
1323:13:27, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
1308:06:30, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
395:See comments on neutrality.
1341:
1275:16:55, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
1257:04:28, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
1239:14:18, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
1220:04:09, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
1200:03:09, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
1174:02:55, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
1144:02:18, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
1109:17:18, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
1091:16:51, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
1073:16:42, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
1059:16:37, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
1041:16:34, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
1027:16:27, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
1008:16:24, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
987:16:34, 2 August 2013 (UTC)
958:12:56, 2 August 2013 (UTC)
931:21:24, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
909:17:38, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
891:17:21, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
868:16:44, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
838:15:56, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
808:15:37, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
789:15:21, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
482:
364:
307:the layout style guideline
276:
198:
185:
759:17:25, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
741:17:13, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
723:16:52, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
701:16:41, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
683:16:36, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
664:16:33, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
646:16:29, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
483:
365:
277:
199:
189:
161:14:43, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
1031:You ought to add that "
186:
558:to the topic, and have
247:. it complies with the
180:for what they are not)
1292:The nomination failed
370:Broad in its coverage
230:Guild of copy editors
687:I will try my best.
476:or content dispute.
357:no original research
288:no original research
1205:Darkness copy-edits
944:, and the citation
387:. it addresses the
334:. All content that
581:Overall assessment
527:copyright statuses
490:, if possible, by
269:list incorporation
591:
590:
560:suitable captions
533:are provided for
89:
88:
1332:
1320:
1306:
1304:
1299:
1273:
1271:
1266:
1218:
1216:
1211:
1198:
1196:
1191:
1142:
1140:
1135:
1107:
1105:
1100:
1089:
1087:
1082:
1057:
1055:
1050:
1025:
1023:
1018:
985:
983:
978:
920:
919:
918:
889:
887:
882:
836:
834:
829:
806:
804:
799:
787:
785:
780:
757:
755:
750:
721:
719:
714:
699:
697:
692:
662:
660:
655:
644:
642:
637:
573:
572:
548:
547:
535:non-free content
515:
514:
462:
461:
426:
425:
405:
404:
381:
380:
349:
348:
328:reliable sources
320:
319:
299:
298:
241:
240:
215:
214:
184:
139:
130:
111:
43:Copyvio detector
31:
1340:
1339:
1335:
1334:
1333:
1331:
1330:
1329:
1318:
1302:
1297:
1295:
1269:
1264:
1262:
1249:Darkness Shines
1214:
1209:
1207:
1194:
1189:
1187:
1138:
1133:
1131:
1103:
1098:
1096:
1085:
1080:
1078:
1077:I am thankful.
1065:Darkness Shines
1053:
1048:
1046:
1033:Darkness Shines
1021:
1016:
1014:
1000:Darkness Shines
981:
976:
974:
923:Darkness Shines
916:
901:Darkness Shines
885:
880:
878:
860:Darkness Shines
832:
827:
825:
802:
797:
795:
783:
778:
776:
753:
748:
746:
733:Darkness Shines
717:
712:
710:
695:
690:
688:
675:Darkness Shines
658:
653:
651:
640:
635:
633:
596:
251:guidelines for
249:Manual of Style
195:Review Comment
147:Darkness Shines
120:
97:
91:
85:
57:
29:
22:
21:
20:
12:
11:
5:
1338:
1336:
1328:
1327:
1326:
1325:
1311:
1310:
1288:
1287:
1286:
1285:
1284:
1283:
1282:
1281:
1280:
1279:
1278:
1277:
1242:
1241:
1177:
1176:
1161:
1160:
1159:
1158:
1157:
1156:
1155:
1154:
1153:
1152:
1151:
1150:
1149:
1148:
1147:
1146:
996:
995:
994:
993:
992:
991:
990:
989:
938:
937:
936:
935:
934:
933:
911:
871:
870:
855:
854:
853:
852:
851:
850:
849:
848:
847:
846:
845:
844:
843:
842:
841:
840:
709:th attribute.
670:
669:
668:
667:
666:
623:
613:
607:
595:
592:
589:
588:
584:
574:
566:
565:
563:
549:
541:
540:
538:
516:
508:
507:
481:
480:
477:
463:
455:
454:
439:
427:
419:
418:
416:
406:
398:
397:
392:
391:of the topic.
382:
374:
373:
363:
362:
360:
355:. it contains
350:
342:
341:
339:
321:
313:
312:
310:
300:
292:
291:
275:
274:
272:
261:words to watch
242:
234:
233:
226:
216:
208:
207:
197:
196:
193:
188:
182:
181:
140:
87:
86:
84:
83:
78:
73:
67:
64:
63:
59:
58:
56:
55:
53:External links
50:
45:
39:
36:
35:
28:
25:
23:
15:
14:
13:
10:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
1337:
1324:
1321:
1315:
1314:
1313:
1312:
1309:
1305:
1300:
1293:
1290:
1289:
1276:
1272:
1267:
1260:
1259:
1258:
1254:
1250:
1246:
1245:
1244:
1243:
1240:
1236:
1232:
1227:
1223:
1222:
1221:
1217:
1212:
1206:
1203:
1202:
1201:
1197:
1192:
1185:
1181:
1180:
1179:
1178:
1175:
1171:
1167:
1163:
1162:
1145:
1141:
1136:
1129:
1125:
1121:
1117:
1114:
1113:
1112:
1111:
1110:
1106:
1101:
1094:
1093:
1092:
1088:
1083:
1076:
1075:
1074:
1070:
1066:
1062:
1061:
1060:
1056:
1051:
1044:
1043:
1042:
1038:
1034:
1030:
1029:
1028:
1024:
1019:
1012:
1011:
1010:
1009:
1005:
1001:
988:
984:
979:
972:
968:
967:
966:
965:
964:
963:
962:
961:
960:
959:
955:
951:
950:Sminthopsis84
947:
943:
932:
928:
924:
912:
910:
906:
902:
898:
894:
893:
892:
888:
883:
875:
874:
873:
872:
869:
865:
861:
857:
856:
839:
835:
830:
823:
819:
815:
811:
810:
809:
805:
800:
792:
791:
790:
786:
781:
774:
770:
766:
762:
761:
760:
756:
751:
744:
743:
742:
738:
734:
730:
726:
725:
724:
720:
715:
708:
704:
703:
702:
698:
693:
686:
685:
684:
680:
676:
671:
665:
661:
656:
649:
648:
647:
643:
638:
630:
629:
627:
624:
621:
617:
614:
611:
608:
605:
601:
598:
597:
593:
585:
582:
578:
575:
568:
567:
564:
561:
557:
553:
550:
543:
542:
539:
536:
532:
528:
524:
520:
517:
510:
509:
505:
501:
497:
493:
489:
486:
478:
475:
471:
467:
464:
457:
456:
452:
450:
445:
440:
437:
436:
431:
428:
421:
420:
417:
414:
413:summary style
410:
407:
400:
399:
396:
393:
390:
386:
383:
376:
375:
371:
368:
361:
358:
354:
351:
344:
343:
340:
337:
333:
329:
325:
322:
315:
314:
311:
308:
304:
301:
294:
293:
289:
285:
284:
280:
273:
270:
266:
262:
258:
254:
253:lead sections
250:
246:
243:
236:
235:
231:
227:
224:
220:
217:
210:
209:
205:
202:
194:
192:
179:
175:
171:
169:
165:
164:
163:
162:
158:
155:
152:
148:
145:
141:
138:
137:
133:
128:
124:
119:
118:
114:
109:
105:
101:
96:
95:
82:
79:
77:
74:
72:
69:
68:
66:
65:
60:
54:
51:
49:
46:
44:
41:
40:
38:
37:
32:
26:
19:
1291:
1225:
1183:
1115:
997:
939:
821:
817:
813:
772:
768:
706:
625:
615:
609:
599:
580:
576:
554:. media are
551:
521:. media are
518:
491:
487:
484:
469:
465:
448:
443:
441:
433:
429:
408:
394:
389:main aspects
384:
369:
366:
352:
332:cited inline
323:
302:
287:
281:
278:
244:
218:
204:Well-written
203:
200:
166:
153:
143:
142:
135:
131:
117:Article talk
116:
112:
93:
90:
81:Instructions
1128:User:Drmies
525:with their
488:Illustrated
453:Dealt with
104:visual edit
729:paraphrase
594:Discussion
283:Verifiable
48:Authorship
34:GA toolbox
727:You need
191:Attribute
144:Reviewer:
71:Templates
62:Reviewing
27:GA Review
610:3a and 4
556:relevant
494:such as
474:edit war
157:contribs
76:Criteria
1120:Yunshui
604:Yunshui
435:Neutral
265:fiction
127:history
108:history
94:Article
1319:Zayeem
1231:Drmies
1166:Drmies
1122:. See
529:, and
523:tagged
496:images
470:Stable
267:, and
257:layout
170:review
971:Smint
504:audio
502:, or
500:video
492:media
286:with
187:Rate
172:(see
136:Watch
16:<
1253:talk
1235:talk
1226:also
1170:talk
1124:this
1069:talk
1037:talk
1004:talk
954:talk
946:here
942:here
927:talk
905:talk
897:here
864:talk
816:and
765:here
737:talk
679:talk
330:are
178:here
174:here
151:talk
123:edit
100:edit
1303:zan
1298:Fai
1270:zan
1265:Fai
1215:zan
1210:Fai
1195:zan
1190:Fai
1139:zan
1134:Fai
1104:zan
1099:Fai
1086:zan
1081:Fai
1054:zan
1049:Fai
1022:zan
1017:Fai
982:zan
977:Fai
886:zan
881:Fai
833:zan
828:Fai
803:zan
798:Fai
784:zan
779:Fai
769:4th
754:zan
749:Fai
718:zan
713:Fai
696:zan
691:Fai
659:zan
654:Fai
641:zan
636:Fai
620:own
415:).
1255:)
1237:)
1186:.
1184:1a
1172:)
1116:1a
1071:)
1039:)
1006:)
973:!
956:)
948:.
929:)
921:.
907:)
866:)
824:?
814:2b
775:.
773:2b
739:)
681:)
600:1a
583:.
579:.
562:.
552:6b
537:.
519:6a
506::
498:,
485:6.
468:.
432:.
409:3b
385:3a
372::
367:3.
359:.
353:2c
326:.
324:2b
309:.
303:2a
290::
279:2.
271:.
263:,
259:,
255:,
245:1b
232:.
219:1a
206::
201:1.
168:GA
159:)
125:|
106:|
102:|
1251:(
1233:(
1168:(
1067:(
1035:(
1002:(
952:(
925:(
903:(
862:(
822:5
818:4
735:(
707:4
677:(
626:6
616:5
577:7
466:5
430:4
154:·
149:(
132:·
129:)
121:(
113:·
110:)
98:(
Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.