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to avoid close paraphrasing). Looking at
Whisnat's own source I found much more detail, which specified this list of side effects was drawn from a single case. As it's a sole case study, putting it in the article text as a list of side effects constitutes undue weight, so the sentence should probably be struck. Later in Giles it's mentioned side effects could be severe enough some men committed suicide; contextually, this seems to be most focused on depression, which was also the one of the three effects called out as most severe by both Whisnat and Giles. If you want to retain a sentence on side effects, refocusing on the potentially dire consequences rather than individual examples would be more due.
271:(including gay clubs), and the movement itself (which as an intangible social movement couldn't be centrally 'shut down') was destroyed due to the destruction of its infrastruture. "The first homosexual movement was destroyed, with the shutting down of homosexual social clubs and associations" (not that exact wording -- it's a proof of concept and a bit clunky -- but in that direction) might get across the idea better, then seguing from there into the seizure and burning of publications.
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sources), the paragraph would flow more smoothly if revamped to contextualize this dichotomy better. That is, currently there's a fairly jarring effect where the paragraph goes from the party's early protection of Röhm and the presence of gay men, to the strongly homophobic views it nonetheless held and applied even in this era, without contextualizing them or explaining how these could simultaneously exist.
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297:-- the death rates of other prisoner groups for comparison are contextualized later in the article, but would it be due to contextualize them here too? More raising the possibility than asking for it, given that this paragraph of the lead is already quite long, but it's worth considering that readers may come in without knowledge of what the death rates were for other groups.
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respect the difficulty of deciding what goes in which articles; I'm gesturing at the background because it's worthwhile to have wherever it gets applied, but it's fair to note the application might be in a different article. As for castration and military service, would the opinions be fine contextualized as opinions, in lieu of certainty of how influential they were?
1028:"Flipside" is usually one word (though the spell checker on this library computer doesn't recognize it, which may be a sign that it's more slangy than usually acceptable in an encyclopedia article). That aside, encouragement of extramarital sex intuitively sounds incompatible with a "family values" ethic; can this be made sense of?
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sentence (or a footnote, though I know you tend to dislike widespread footnoting) noting that political enemies of the regime were a major focus, and contextualizing/comparing the degree of focus on enemies, the degree of focus on sexual activity, and the way those were both prioritized above all else.
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consequences mentioned, and per the prior note it's probably undue to focus on single-case side effects). It may be more accurate to note that many of
Vaernet's victims died shortly after than to have the current note, and to see what else about the medico-historical background is worth incorporating.
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It's also explicitly mentioned that many of the men who were the victims of this experiment were castrated beforehand; Herrn goes into further detail about the several decades prior of research at that point into attempting to cure gay men by castrating them and replacing their hormone source with an
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Sorry for the few days of delay here -- a couple sentences caught my eye for their medical statements, and I ended up getting and reading through the sources (and in one case its own sources) to see what was being claimed in them. One checked out but could use some more in-text elaboration; the other
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I get why the parenthesis is there, but it's a bit clunky, and I'm not generally a fan of parenthetical statements in articles anyway. Currently it mostly distracts from the sentence and its point, and could be omitted. If you want to retain that information, it could be restructured into a different
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Aside from the prose concerns with this sentence, I'm not sure it's the best way of expressing the information it's trying to express. It's clear from this point that gay romantic and sexual relationships were under heavy secrecy already for all but a very small minority of men, so it's difficult for
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In the prewar camps, both Jews and homosexual prisoners ranked at the bottom of the prisoner hierarchy and those who were both Jewish and homosexual fared the worst. Along with Jews, they were often assigned to segregated labor details where they had to perform especially dirty and backbreaking work
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The Nazis weren't actually that into family values, although they leaned opportunistically into this to gain support. Their primary ideology was a national or racial one, if family values or
Christianity was considered to get in the way of this goal it was cast aside. (for example, see Longerich p.
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Giles also provides more detail on some other points I've asked about. He specifies the reasons castrated men were nonetheless able to serve, and is more explicit than the article is about 175a being drawn from the specific fear that young men could be seduced into long-term homosexuality (right now
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The health consequences of castration are still a pretty complex discussion even at this much more advanced point in the field of endocrinology, and the examples used stood out to me as oddly specific. Reading
Whisnat, I found he reproduced more or less the same list (with some rewording on your end
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It's not an exact quote, rather paraphrased. Zinn states: "Für
Himmler war schließlich auch die Frage, was mit Homosexuellen nach Verbüßung einer Gefängnisstrafe geschehen sollte, von großer Bedeutung, denn »der Homosexuelle« kam in seinen Augen »aus dem Gefängnis genauso homosexuell heraus, wie er
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The final mention of forced labourers doesn't seem to match the rest of the groups listed. The sense in which forced labourers were a group persecuted by the Nazis is a different sense to in which e.g. Jewish people, Roma, and disabled people were -- it was a quality the Nazis assigned to them, not
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All Giles says about suicide is that it was "not uncommon" among men who underwent castration, but we know from other sources, and state elsewhere in the article, that in fact suicide was common for all men persecuted for homosexuality. Will look for better sources on this. For the military service
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I think this is more likely to refer to longstanding differences in prosecution policies, especially related to religious differences in
Germany with Catholic areas being more anti-homosexual than Protestant areas. Eg. Munich (Catholic) aggressively prosecuted homosexuals throughout the Weimar era,
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is a bit odd -- the structure of the phrase means the referent for "their former members" reads as "activists" rather than the "organizations" earlier in the sentence it presumably is, and more to the point, "activists" and "people who keep quiet about their activities" are contradictory groupings.
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I referred earlier to the issue of sexual orientation typologies. The context where I'm most familiar with sexological typologies often focus strongly on gender role expectations, e.g. considering more feminine gay men to be of a different 'type' to more masculine ones. Was this an aspect of Nazi
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The best balance on discussing castration side effects (which I agree is a reasonable thing to mention) is probably the "side effects were sometimes severe enough to lead to suicide" of Giles, without too much speculation on what those side effects were. I did get a "there's more to say" sense and
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The best known experiments involving homosexuals were attempts by endocrinologist Carl
Vaernet to change prisoners' sexual orientation by implanting an artificial gland that released testosterone. This research, carried out on non-consenting prisoners at Buchenwald, had drastic health consequences
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The Nazis were not so concerned about whether homosexuals were effeminate. In the context of persecution, it was more important whether they were likely to be "repeat offenders". Actually, I ended up taking out the bit about 1944 typology because it does not seem to have influenced policy in any
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The last paragraph jumps rapidly from the relative tolerance of Röhm and others to the "being gay is always bad" take, in a way that crosses timelines somewhat awkwardly (events from the 1930s followed by events from the 1920s). If it's possible (i.e. if this isn't reflecting a limitation of the
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Is there more on how this specifically impacted areas with previously proportionately low rates of prosecution? The structure of the last couple subsections mostly discusses nationwide phenomena and doesn't focus much on regional variation (the last substantial discussion of it was in the first
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Well, the list is mixed in that way. The deserters also would not exist if not for the Nazis' wars of aggression. The source lists them all together: "Die von uns recherchierten
Personen sind häufig im Kontext von Doppelt- und Mehrfachstigmatisierungen als Juden, Sinti und Roma,
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Well, they made that comparison, but it looks...striking...to the modern reader to present it precisely this way (and not necessarily striking the way it should be striking). "Homosexuals were permitted to serve in the
Wehrmacht assuming they were willing to bear arms and "control their sexual
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I removed the sentence about consequences of castration, but I do think something should be put in about the negative physical and psychological effects of this procedure, which readers are not necessarily familiar with. I changed the wording to "pellet" and mentioned deaths, but I'm not sure
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part of 19th and early 20th century endocrinology). It's hard to be sure from either source what drastic health consequences were experienced -- it seems many (most?) subjects died within a short time of the procedure, but there's very little long-term followup (only one man has his long-term
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This drew my eye because of how young endocrinology was as a field at the time; the Nobel Prize for first synthesizing testosterone had been awarded just over a decade earlier, and the era is at the tail end of what's been called the "heroic age of endocrinology" because of just how difficult
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Reworded. What Whisnant says is "Participants in the Weimar gay movement also seem to have come to some sort of agreement to keep quiet about their activities and membership in order to hamper police efforts. We know that members largely stuck to their promise: there are a few known cases of
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the process of producing them with contemporary technology ended up being (testosterone was first synthesized from 25,000 litres of urine). Whisnat's description of it is pretty short, but Weindling goes much more in-depth. I also found another source that described Vaernet's experiments in
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This is an allusion to the systematic falsification of the cause of death of prisoners. The implication from Giles and Longerich is that what Himmler is really saying is that they will be executed at the camp and their death certificate will state that they were shot when trying to escape.
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I'm not sure "gland" is a good descriptor here -- Weindling calls it a tube, Herrn a pellet. The term feels as though it was chosen to avoid close paraphrasing, but it doesn't match medical use, where "artificial gland" has anachronistic implications -- it sounds to the reader like a
513:), feel free to focus on that one -- I'm not always the most prompt reviewer (though I'm being moreso than usual lately), so I don't mind if people I'm reviewing longer/complex articles of focus on some of the shorter ones while I'm in the process of conducting a full review.
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was already common practice by this point for camp prisoners generally, and also obviously conditional on them trying to escape (I guess Himmler assumed any SS man would try escape the camps?), it's not quite clear how this translates into a specific/explicit death sentence.
895:(which is separately notable from this one, there's a lot more to say). What do you think would be appropriate to say about castration and military service? Giles mentions some individuals' opinions on page 49 but it's not clear whether these people are driving Nazi policy. (
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You have two consecutive paragraphs here starting "Historian ". It might be worth seeing if there's an alternative sentence structure usable here, because the repetition is a bit straining, but I recognize the constraints of encyclopedic writing can be pretty tight here.
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There may not be a good way to handle this...but "deadly shoe testing experiments" as a phrasing has a bit more bathos than appropriate for the serious subject matter. Depending on what the source supports, it might work to either add a bit more detail about
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marriages -- especially as time marches on, more and more readers will be coming from a place where gay marriage in the West is taken as an automatic given, and in the context of an article about homophobic persecution that might call for a double-take...
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I think a combination of #2 and #3 would present the issue well -- mostly #3, but also the elements of #2 that mention gay men more broadly (as only mentioning Röhm would still leave the hanging thread of how other Nazi-affiliated gay men were treated).
862:'untainted' one (before the synthesis of testosterone, often by transplating the testicles of straight men into gay men), which may provide worthwhile historical context. I think I might have a book on that specific note somewhere, but I'm not sure...
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while Berlin and Hamburg (Protestant) were noted for their hands-off approach. Schwartz isn't entirely clear on what he means; Whisnant specifically notes an increase in indictments in Hamburg. I'll look for additional sources to clarify this point.
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I feel like this phrasing is a bit circumlocutory, given that "in contrast" is implied by the juxtaposition of those statements in the first place. That said, it's defensible/could go either way, I'm just drawing attention to it for another look.
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subsection, discussing how smaller cities sometimes retained a gay nightlife even with the early crackdowns); the introduction here of how significant regional variance continued this late in the persecution's ramping-up is worth expanding on.
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Röhm's sexuality weakened his position in the party and was cited by his opponents to undermine him. Although he asserted that the party had become "accustomed to my criminal idiosyncrasy", Marhoefer concludes that this "was wild optimism or
327:"High point" comes in with some positive connotations/implications of 'success' or 'achievement' that, while clearly not intended here, are a bit unfortunately eye-catching. Consider alternative phrasings -- "most serious"? "most severe"?
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Kommunisten, Sozialdemokraten, Menschen mit Behinderungen, Prostituierte/Strichjungen, sogenannte Kriminelle, Asoziale, Fahnen-flüchtige oder auch als Zwangsarbeiter zu betrachten". I've reworded and added more info from a new source.
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Historian Peter Longerich states that from 1936 to 1939 the German police was (besides the political enemies of the regime) "preoccupied above all with the regulation of sexual activity, that is to say, the fight against abortion and
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desires" ", followed by how this meant they were treated as sexual offenders of the same kind as rapists and child molesters, who were also allowed to serve? Not sure quite what the sources support here, so just throwing out ideas.
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Unfortunately, all the sources I can find assume that the reader knows about this euphemism and don't explain explicitly, so I'm not sure I can clarify without original research. Alternatively, I could cite
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Glad you're liking the review :) The remaining sections after #Methods are short enough I think we're getting close to finishing this up, once the last and admittedly longest subsections of it are handled.
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individuals who had been quite active within the gay movement but who, when caught by the Gestapo or criminal police, mentioned nothing about their previous involvement."
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OK, I removed this sentence because if I spent the number of words necessary to describe how awful it was, it would be UNDUE. These experiments should be included in
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The flip side to the Nazis' persecution of homosexuality was their encouragement of heterosexual relations (including extramarital sex) for racially desirable people.
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My laptop has also reached the 'randomly bluescreens' stage of its lifecycle, so I might sometimes have logistical issues while typing up longer comments...
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Nazi Germany's persecution of homosexuals is considered to be the high point in a longer history of discrimination and violence targeting sexual minorities.
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That should be all of it (some other minor points I've wavered on at GAN level, may bring up at FAC). Excellent article that I'll be happy to pass soon.
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The semicolon doesn't flow well here, as the latter half is a sentence fragment. "committed suicide, including 25% of those persecuted in Hamburg"?
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Complicating the Nazis' efforts, many homosexual men did not fit these stereotypes, and in contrast, many effeminate men were not homosexual.
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No worries, I really appreciate your detailed review! This section was the one I was least happy with when I nominated the article. (
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Thanks so much for your comments! I'll ping you when this gets to FAC. (
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