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Thanks for taking up the review, and for removing that unsourced paragraph. I only realized just now that the paragraph about the 2017 truck attack - which incidentally is irrelevant to any aspect of Pier 40, other than the fact that the attack occurred nearby - was added by an IP user who apparently
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The NY Times source doesn't say why, and neither does the NY Post. I can only assume that the pier is sinking because of the deferred maintenance, but there's nothing in either source. Villager source (which I did find a new url for) only talks about the dilapidation.
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Thank you very much for the expedited review - it was much faster than my 2-week-long GA review, for which I apologize. I have addressed all of the issues above.
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Removed. I also added a red link to the building, because it is notable and pretty prominent, and I am surprised this doesn't have its own article.
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The main issues with the article concern the prose in certain areas and the status of some references which are dead but can be archived. On hold.
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As a thanks for reviewing one of my articles, I shall review this one.
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