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I think the Name section can be integrated into the History section after the discussion over his discovery. Otherwise it disrupts the chronology.
172:"circa 24 July 2005) " no need for that footnote to be inserted there in the lead. Either put it in the infobox or just explain it in the article. 175:
No need for references in lead when everything there should be covered (in more detail) in the main part of the article, so the refs can go there.
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That's all I have. I can't check any of the references however, so I've asked for a second opinion on those Polish language sources. On hold.
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Ok, I've spot-checked some of the online refs via Google Translate and I'm happy to AGF that the rest are fine, so I'm promoting.
126: 297: 231:"to start finding his own sources of food that were not reliant on humans." no need for "that were not reliant on humans". 52: 122: 312: 279: 257: 150: 293: 270: 107: 99: 307: 289: 274: 252: 146: 197:" a devastating flood" POV, just "a flood" and perhaps describe objectively what damage that flood did. 227:"vicinity Pubal was relatively quickly seen on his own again and trying to find humans"-: --> 228:"vicinity, Pubal was relatively quickly seen on his own again, trying to find humans" 292:, thank you for the review. I've now made all the suggested changes. Cheers! -- 115: 17: 213:"but it was not long before he lost interest in representatives" -: --> 273:
I'll close the review on 30 April if we don't make progress. Cheers.
247:" the same documentary received " it received. And what accolades? 92: 317: 301: 284: 262: 160: 217:"at one point literally interrupting " no need for literally. 194:" charcoal burning workers" why not just "charcoal burners"? 178:" his continuous escapes " not continuous, numerous perhaps. 204:"leftovers" is an odd way of putting it, remnants perhaps? 237:"he might end up hurting someone when frightened" -: --> 134: 103: 200:"His age was said to be no more than two days " -: --> 223:"carefully orchestrated in a way that could " -: --> 201:"He was said to be no more than two days old..." 8: 214:" but he soon lost interest in rejoining"? 30: 61: 33: 181:"his entire life" entire isn't needed. 7: 190:"On the 26th of July, 2005," -: --> 187:"any name as names " is repetitive. 234:"250 kilograms" convert to pounds. 24: 207:"with his wife " and his wife. 1: 220:"completely tame." ref order. 210:"milk through a" milk with a 313:Stay indoors, stay safe!!!! 280:Stay indoors, stay safe!!!! 258:Stay indoors, stay safe!!!! 340: 318:07:51, 30 April 2020 (UTC) 302:20:30, 28 April 2020 (UTC) 285:09:38, 27 April 2020 (UTC) 263:09:52, 23 April 2020 (UTC) 161:12:41, 19 April 2020 (UTC) 244:" has passed away" died. 241:"for good." permanently. 238:"he could harm someone" 191:"On 26 July 2005," 316: 294:Samotny Wędrowiec 283: 271:Samotny Wędrowiec 261: 89: 88: 331: 310: 308:The Rambling Man 290:The Rambling Man 277: 275:The Rambling Man 255: 253:The Rambling Man 147:The Rambling Man 139: 130: 111: 43:Copyvio detector 31: 339: 338: 334: 333: 332: 330: 329: 328: 120: 97: 91: 85: 57: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 337: 335: 327: 326: 325: 324: 323: 322: 321: 320: 249: 248: 245: 242: 239: 235: 232: 229: 225: 221: 218: 215: 211: 208: 205: 202: 198: 195: 192: 188: 185: 182: 179: 176: 173: 165: 140: 87: 86: 84: 83: 78: 73: 67: 64: 63: 59: 58: 56: 55: 53:External links 50: 45: 39: 36: 35: 28: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 336: 319: 314: 309: 305: 304: 303: 299: 295: 291: 288: 287: 286: 281: 276: 272: 269: 268: 267: 266: 265: 264: 259: 254: 246: 243: 240: 236: 233: 230: 226: 222: 219: 216: 212: 209: 206: 203: 199: 196: 193: 189: 186: 183: 180: 177: 174: 171: 170: 169: 168: 163: 162: 158: 155: 152: 148: 145: 141: 138: 137: 133: 128: 124: 119: 118: 114: 109: 105: 101: 96: 95: 82: 79: 77: 74: 72: 69: 68: 66: 65: 60: 54: 51: 49: 46: 44: 41: 40: 38: 37: 32: 26: 19: 250: 224:"managed to" 166: 164: 153: 143: 142: 135: 131: 117:Article talk 116: 112: 93: 90: 81:Instructions 104:visual edit 48:Authorship 34:GA toolbox 18:Talk:Pubal 144:Reviewer: 71:Templates 62:Reviewing 27:GA Review 167:Comments 157:contribs 76:Criteria 127:history 108:history 94:Article 136:Watch 16:< 298:talk 151:talk 123:edit 100:edit 300:) 159:) 125:| 106:| 102:| 315:) 311:( 296:( 282:) 278:( 260:) 256:( 154:· 149:( 132:· 129:) 121:( 113:· 110:) 98:(

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