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Do we have any information about different sources for her name and life? Are there conflicting accounts by different people? I'm not familiar with this topic area really at all, so if there's little known then just say so and we won't worry about it.
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I have no concerns on this criterion. The article gives the reader a focused, measured overview of what is known of Rabia Balkhi and her influence on other poets and authors. It avoids going off-topic or giving excessive detail.
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Sources are reliable, primarily published books and journals. I have verified that Sharma and
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As far as main aspects go for a very niche subject such as this one, and bearing in mind I am in no way a subject-matter expert here, I am pretty certain this covers all the main points.
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That's all I have. Placing this on hold pending responses from the nominator. It's optional, but I do have several GANs and an FAC at the moment if you feel like returning the favor.
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authors such as āAttÄr in his poems and JÄmiin his biographical dictionary of Suļ¬s, NafahÄt al-ons, were responsible for converting her image into that of a mystic poet.
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Image shows the mausoleum where Rabia Balkhi's shrine is located. For a subject that lived this long ago, that's about the best we can hope for.
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All concerns addressed, promoting now. Good work and congratulations.
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