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A very well written article, both you and Vrxces did incredible work here. Obscure mobile or indie games getting the attention they deserve on
Knowledge (XXG) makes me happy. I'll place this on hold to give you time to address the comments, but they shouldn't take too long.
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None of the quickfail criteria applies to this article. While the nominator is not the primary author, the primary author has given clear permission in the above discussion for the nominator to continue forth with the article. Onto the review.
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I understand they're meant to summarize the following sentences, but "Reviewers were mixed on the gameplay and controls" and "Critics were mixed on the game's limited content and replayability" technically need their own citations.
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I mean, the article is pretty short and the subject is simple, plus I don't like to enforce my own personal writing style on others unless the writing doesn't make any sense.
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Wikilinking mini golf a second time is fine, but I'm not sure if its recommended (I don't care, it's just something worth pointing out because MOS or something)
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Seeing this nomination and remembering this game existed unlocked some weird, distant memories I forgot I ever had. Anyways, soon.
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