243:"In the episode, Dr. Meredith Grey (Ellen Pompeo) struggles with her Alzheimer's-stricken mother's becoming temporarily lucid. Further storylines include Dr. Izzie Stevens (Katherine Heigl) and Dr. Miranda Bailey (Chandra Wilson) continuously seeking patients for their new clinic, Dr. Richard Webber (James Pickens, Jr.) dealing with the repercussions of his upcoming retirement, and Dr. George O'Malley (T.R. Knight) facing negative response from colleagues on his unexpected marriage". - Mention actress and name of Merediths mother, and who George marries (and actor).
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930:: Per good article criteria part 6 this article fails, as the image does not have "valid fair use rationales". You may renominate soon, after you have fixed the point above. However, before you renominate, I advise you to either a) strenghte the file's rationale b) chose to not upload an image for this article. Well, Good luck! —
279:"Kate Burton (Dr. Ellis Grey) reprised her role as a guest star, in addition to Sarah Utterback (Olivia Harper)" - If you mention mother as I sadi above, then your have to rewrite this. Also if not, it is inconsistent with the rest of the article. You must put: Name of character (Actor name).
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There are four quotes in production, five including the one the quote box. While on one hand, I see your point, on the other hand, the statements are quoted can not be put in indirect speech and express the same meaning as Joan Rater wanted. Do you see what I mean?
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Just like stated above at "Production", moving the statements I chose to quote to indirect speech, would not provide the same message for the reader. Some at reception also provide interjections which obviously can not be put into indirect speech.
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I respectfully disagree. It doesn't sound accurate, and it wouldn't be appropriate to include these different types of information (title reference and filming location) in the same sentence.
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I'm sorry. I did do it, but I might have accidentally closed the page before saving. I'm working on it.
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Firstly, go through the article and look for spelling mistakes. There is one in the first line, :D
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