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You linked and explained the wrestling jargon and abbreviations, just something I noticed, which is a plus for certain topics which can be a tad confusing to outsiders - even myself, who knows nothing about wrestling, understood it! ;) Overall, this is a nice work, and close to being a good article.
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There's now more context to the situation, which is nice, but the "flirted" part is still not grammatically right in that sentence. I think it would work in the next one, but by now I don't have a full grasp on the chronology of facts. Could you look into this one more time? Thanks.
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Okay, I figured it was probably WP:PW norms. :) I think this was just an "explanation needed" point. I read this article from a totally outsiders perspective, and with this review I assumed that a couple of points I raised would probably just be explained away.
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section, by her ring name "Natalya". Did she not have a ring name before SmackDown? If so, this should be briefly explained, or just her real name somehow introduced again: ("Nattie Neidhart, under the ring name of Natalya, ...").
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It might just be me, but why is the one entrance song is listed in bold? I'm sure there's a reason (perhaps it their majorly-used song, because it was in their WWE career), but that's wasn't obvious. Also, same goes for
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Thank you for taking the time to review the article. Well, we have to be specific when it comes to wrestling terms to those who are unfamiliar with the subject. :) I believe I've addressed all your concerns.
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You see, Nattie Neidhart used the ringname "Nattie Neidhart" during her time with Florida Championship Wrestling. When she went to WWE, she uses the name "Natalya". Hopefully, this clarifies it, or not.
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Yes, and thanks for promptly addressing the issues. There's still those couple of minor points that I'd like to get fixed (which might involve Nici's view), but the article is certainly close.
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The infobox image could use some sort of caption: i.e., when/where was it taken? And identifying the sisters would be good, but it's not exactly necessary because they are twins.
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The clarification does answer my question, and it's not a big deal now. Still, I'd prefer if this were explained in the context, 'cause otherwise it's not quite clear.
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I took a look at all the changes, and everything looks good now. Congratulations, I'm passing this as a GA! You guys did good work. Best,
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The reason the song is bolded is because that is their current theme. Also, if I can suggest to you the pro wrestling
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On February 13, 2009, on SmackDown, after flirting with the Bellas backstage, John Morrison and The Miz won a match...
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The problem is that we can't tell them apart. But, I added a caption, hopefully it works. --
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I removed the whole "The girls reunited" thing, cause I haven't seen them back together . --
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It does have several issues that are non-substantial, so I'm putting it on hold. Best,
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This sentence is kind of clumsy, and there's gotta be a better way to word it: "
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I'm not that 100% sure what "World Cup" its supposed to be linked at. I'll let
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Fine, that looks great now. Distinguishing the twins is optional.
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I've reworded it once more. Hopefully it makes more sense now. ♥
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After Neidhart was called up the main roster in April 2008...
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Little quibble; could you link "Fox"? Perhaps pipe to
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Ok, I think I've finished the remaining problems. ♥
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