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I'm sorry for not being able to take up a more thorough review at the moment; I'll be back in a couple of hours and continue the review. I saw the Plot section and its excellent, so that's two parts down.
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The lead is emphasizing too heavily on the plot. The paragraph needs trimming, and should ideally be merged with the first paragraph.
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