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NEQ, 125, 165, 155, 65, 1004, 260, 80, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018071900, , BEST, 0, 201N, 1309E, 40, 993, MD, 34, NEQ, 160, 210, 130, 100, 1004, 350, 100, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018071906, , BEST, 0, 206N, 1315E, 40, 992, TS, 34, NEQ, 165, 195, 115, 85, 1005, 390, 110, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018071912, , BEST, 0, 211N, 1317E, 40, 989, TS, 34, NEQ, 170, 185, 100, 110, 1005, 360, 100, 0, 0, , 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, , WP, 12, 2018071918, , BEST, 0, 219N, 1314E, 45, 989, TS, 34, NEQ, 150, 160, 100, 110, 1002, 280, 80, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072000, , BEST, 0, 226N, 1310E, 45, 989, TS, 34, NEQ, 150, 160, 100, 110, 1002, 270, 55, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, D, WP, 12, 2018072006, , BEST, 0, 233N, 1306E, 45, 989, TS, 34, NEQ, 140, 135, 85, 110, 1001, 255, 55, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, D, WP, 12, 2018072012, , BEST, 0, 244N, 1298E, 45, 987, TS, 34, NEQ, 140, 120, 90, 110, 1001, 245, 60, 55, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, D, WP, 12, 2018072018, , BEST, 0, 254N, 1289E, 45, 985, TS, 34, NEQ, 155, 125, 95, 115, 1000, 240, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, D, WP, 12, 2018072100, , BEST, 0, 266N, 1279E, 45, 986, TS, 34, NEQ, 185, 140, 80, 125, 1000, 220, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, D, WP, 12, 2018072106, , BEST, 0, 277N, 1268E, 45, 983, TS, 34, NEQ, 185, 140, 80, 120, 998, 210, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072112, , BEST, 0, 288N, 1256E, 45, 985, TS, 34, NEQ, 170, 125, 75, 100, 1000, 210, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072118, , BEST, 0, 298N, 1240E, 50, 985, TS, 34, NEQ, 160, 120, 70, 105, 1000, 195, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072200, , BEST, 0, 308N, 1230E, 55, 982, TS, 34, NEQ, 170, 105, 75, 120, 1000, 170, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072206, , BEST, 0, 319N, 1220E, 55, 982, TS, 34, NEQ, 130, 105, 85, 100, 999, 170, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072206, , BEST, 0, 319N, 1220E, 55, 982, TS, 50, NEQ, 65, 50, 40, 50, 999, 170, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072212, , BEST, 0, 326N, 1209E, 45, 989, TS, 34, NEQ, 135, 105, 50, 90, 1000, 170, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072218, , BEST, 0, 335N, 1197E, 40, 993, TS, 34, NEQ, 125, 100, 50, 85, 1001, 165, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072300, , BEST, 0, 344N, 1190E, 35, 991, TS, 34, NEQ, 110, 90, 40, 70, 1001, 160, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, M, WP, 12, 2018072306, , BEST, 0, 354N, 1184E, 30, 989, TD, 0, , 0, 0, 0, 0, 1000, 175, 60, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, S, WP, 12, 2018072312, , BEST, 0, 366N, 1178E, 30, 1000, TD, 0, , 0, 0, 0, 0, 1000, 160, 50, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, S, WP, 12, 2018072318, , BEST, 0, 377N, 1175E, 25, 1004, TD, 0, , 0, 0, 0, 0, 1000, 115, 50, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, S, WP, 12, 2018072400, , BEST, 0, 391N, 1175E, 25, 1004, TD, 0, , 0, 0, 0, 0, 1000, 150, 50, 0, 0, , 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, , WP, 12, 2018072406, , BEST, 0, 401N, 1184E, 25, 1004, TD, 0, , 0, 0, 0, 0, 1002, 115, 50, 0, 0, , 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, , WP, 12, 2018072412, , BEST, 0, 416N, 1202E, 25, 1004, TD, 0, , 0, 0, 0, 0, 1002, 115, 50, 0, 0, , 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, ,
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WP, 12, 2018071812, , BEST, 0, 196N, 1294E, 30, 1000, MD, 0, , 0, 0, 0, 0, 1005, 270, 90, 0, 0, W, 0, , 0, 0, AMPIL, S, 0, , 0, 0, 0, 0, TRANSITIONED, wpD42018 to wp122018, WP, 12, 2018071818, , BEST, 0, 198N, 1301E, 35, 996, MD, 34,
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It sounded questionable to me too - I think the correct word should be "sailings". For "canceled" vs "cancelled" I'm honestly not sure which is preferred, I've always assumed one "l" is the US spelling while two "l"s is the UK spelling.
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What kind of ships? I also found it a bit confusing to say the ships were "cancelled". I think cancelled is also missing an l for this usage. Check for more as I have seen both spellings used multiple times.
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Ampil then maintained this intensity for the next two days while continuing northwest due to the limiting effect of surrounding dry air
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Slight weakening took place as Ampil crossed the East China Sea, before Ampil made landfall in Shanghai, China on July 22.
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Two issues here; firstly I would avoid using Ampil twice in the same sentence. A comma after China is also needed.
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This would seem to imply only systems forming within the PAR get named, which isn't true. ~
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Something about this doesn't sound right. I would replace newly with recently.
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This makes it seem like the storm continued northwest due to the dry air.
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Make sure date formats are consistent. ie July 20 to 21 or July 20–21...
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with a large rainband extending over the southern half of the system
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Probably should clarify first that it was the storm's winds.
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Could be a FA, or an A-class article if that can be done.
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I would rather this say "As the system developed within"
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the National Meteorological Center issued a yellow alert
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