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for details on how and where to set one up) if need be. I just think it's not that relevant and may be distracting to readers to see all those ISBN numbers there in the open.
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I would remove the mentioning of the ISBN numbers in the "Art and fanbooks" subsection, or at least move them into a "Further reading" section (see
272:โ†’ The second part of that sentence doesn't fit well structurally with the first part, and I think it's just the wording. Try something like 75: 115: 17: 92: 189:
The group departs to rescue the two Sakuras learning from Yลซko that Fei-Wang is in a Kingdom of Clow
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Your expression of the rankings of the manga, anime, etc. are inconsistent. Sometimes you have
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Active Anime's Christopher Seaman had mixed feelings, finding the romantic themes mature,
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Thanks for the review. I'll try an eye on any issue and I think I will not be very busy.
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As they travel, they learn that the feathers have special powers and can
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while some of the magical themes would appeal to younger audiences
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and the magical themes appealing to younger audiences
172:Fixed. Every feather I've seen has magical traits. 167:supernatural abilities to those who possess them. 8: 245:. Stick to one type of expression for that. 30: 61: 33: 7: 334: 274:finding the romantic themes mature 24: 18:Talk:Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle 333: 264:"Anime reception" subsection: 1: 241:, and other times you have 382: 191:whose time has been halted 360:21:48, 9 March 2011 (UTC) 346:15:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC) 329:01:50, 7 March 2011 (UTC) 312:01:38, 7 March 2011 (UTC) 292:01:50, 7 March 2011 (UTC) 258:01:50, 7 March 2011 (UTC) 231:01:50, 7 March 2011 (UTC) 208:01:50, 7 March 2011 (UTC) 182:01:50, 7 March 2011 (UTC) 151:01:38, 7 March 2011 (UTC) 198:Tried to fix that. 89: 88: 373: 337: 336: 161:"Plot" section: 139: 130: 111: 43:Copyvio detector 31: 381: 380: 376: 375: 374: 372: 371: 370: 120: 97: 91: 85: 57: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 379: 377: 369: 368: 367: 366: 365: 364: 363: 362: 302: 301: 297: 296: 295: 294: 262: 261: 260: 235: 234: 233: 212: 211: 210: 186: 185: 184: 158: 157: 140: 87: 86: 84: 83: 78: 73: 67: 64: 63: 59: 58: 56: 55: 53:External links 50: 45: 39: 36: 35: 28: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 378: 361: 357: 353: 349: 348: 347: 344: 340: 332: 331: 330: 326: 322: 318: 317: 316: 315: 314: 313: 310: 306: 299: 298: 293: 289: 285: 281: 280: 278: 277: 271: 269: 263: 259: 255: 251: 247: 246: 244: 240: 236: 232: 228: 224: 220: 219: 217: 213: 209: 205: 201: 197: 196: 194: 192: 187: 183: 179: 175: 171: 170: 168: 166: 160: 159: 155: 154: 153: 152: 149: 145: 141: 138: 137: 133: 128: 124: 119: 118: 114: 109: 105: 101: 96: 95: 82: 79: 77: 74: 72: 69: 68: 66: 65: 60: 54: 51: 49: 46: 44: 41: 40: 38: 37: 32: 26: 19: 338: 304: 303: 279:or similar. 275: 273: 267: 265: 242: 238: 190: 188: 165:bestow often 164: 162: 156:Prose issues 143: 142: 135: 131: 117:Article talk 116: 112: 93: 90: 81:Instructions 305:In progress 300:Conclusions 104:visual edit 48:Authorship 34:GA toolbox 216:WP:LAYOUT 144:Reviewer: 71:Templates 62:Reviewing 27:GA Review 343:MuZemike 309:MuZemike 239:number 3 221:Removed. 148:MuZemike 76:Criteria 352:Tintor2 350:Thanks! 321:Tintor2 284:Tintor2 250:Tintor2 223:Tintor2 200:Tintor2 174:Tintor2 127:history 108:history 94:Article 339:Passed 282:Done. 248:Done. 136:Watch 16:< 356:talk 325:talk 288:talk 254:talk 243:29th 227:talk 204:talk 178:talk 123:edit 100:edit 358:) 327:) 290:) 256:) 229:) 206:) 180:) 125:| 106:| 102:| 354:( 323:( 286:( 270:; 252:( 225:( 202:( 193:. 176:( 146:โ€“ 132:ยท 129:) 121:( 113:ยท 110:) 98:(

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