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The lead should note some of her scientific equipment, since it is mentioned repeatedly in the service history.
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You're welcome to the rest of the class, but I needed this one for my Soviet cruisers of WW2 topic.--
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Ah! This had been an article I hoped to improve, but you beat me to it. Better step up my game. —
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All done, let me know if anything requires further clarification. Thanks for the review.--
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