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This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing.
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A few comments, most of which are repeats of my comments on other articles of this class. Suggest implementing the changes on all ships of the class:
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