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Talk:Vought F6U Pirate/GA1

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This article, while short, is close to meeting the Good Article criteria. I made some copyedits throughout the article; please review to ensure I did not change the meaning or stray too far from offline sources I couldn't access. Please also review and comment on the following concerns:
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in the lead since the inclusion of the afterburner seems to have been a key addition to this aircraft; is there an appropriate article on the use of composite materials in aircraft that
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Second paragraph of Design and development needs at least one citation at the end of the paragraph, and more if applicable.
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doesn't sound right here; perhaps this would work better as two sentences if the two thoughts aren't closely connected?
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I noticed that links to a disambiguation page; should we use the more-specific
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I've clarified the link as you suggested and added "Texas-based".--
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No problem! We're close but I still have one open concern above.
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article, or is the Texas Naval Reserve something else?
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Talk:Vought F6U Pirate
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afterburner
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Composite construction
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Grondemar
01:35, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
Texas Naval Reserve
United States Navy Reserve
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Grondemar
01:35, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
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