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The article overall looks complete, well written and well referenced. The only glaring flaw is the lack of tables for showing scores and records which make the article easy to read and simplifies the text for the reader. In this case the article is cluttered with scores and other statistics which
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I've created a "Statistics" section and added some tables to the article now. I feel de
Villiers article has too many tables and the level of detail in each table is too high. GAs generally should not have those many statistical tables. Tables and lists should not outweigh the prose, but that is
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Removed two quote boxes, but kept the one which I feel is important. Kohli has stated on several occasions that his father was his biggest inspiration to play cricket and his death made Kohli take up his career more seriously. I think it should be kept in the article.
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Thank you for taking up the review. Note: I will be available over the next 12 hours to address further concerns, after which I'm gonna be busy until
Saturday afternoon. So I may not be able to respond to your comments during that period.
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I just wanted you to have a look at an article that is better managed with tables, Agree on AB issue, still tables can make reading way easier if used properly.
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The articles looks good for the time being but can get better. Still it satisfies the criteria for GA. So I am going to pass the article.
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