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I've changed "doughnut robot" to "Donut Robot" it in the lede in the article, and in the hook above for consistency. I'm pretty sure it's spelled and capitalized in different ways across various sources, but the two sources cited for the first occurrence of "Donut Robot" definitely spell it that way,
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Source: Krondl, Michael (2014-06-01). The Donut: History, Recipes, and Lore from Boston to Berlin. Chicago Review Press. ISBN 978-1-61374-673-8.
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