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Tweaked first sentence. Second sentence is sourced at the end of the following one. Here's the quote from the paper: "Malas is known mostly for his feature films, but onedocumentary he made has also won great acclaim, both in the Arab world, among those lucky enough to have seen a copy, and in Europe
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Language is generally good, but this sentence—"Their unique answers provide a window into the subconscious of the
Palestinian refugee."—could be stated more neutrally. "Great acclaim" could also be clarified, especially since there is conspicuously not a footnote at the end of the
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Shadows" was banned; Zozo, maybe you could find an online source that confirms
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England and France. The Dream is a documentary in which Malas interviews Palestinians of the refugee camps around Beirut about their dreams." I put quotation marks around "great acclaim."
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I couldn't find an online source; but perhaps you can see the preview of "Dissident Syria: Making
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