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Reception section (including citing), but I think more content could be added here. I don't think it rises to the level of violating neutrality, however. After running Earwig's Copyvio Detector, I initially found a 90.6% confidence of plagiarism, but it was a case of the
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I feel like the hookiness of ALT0 relies upon the series being known as popular by the reader; otherwise, why is it interesting that someone almost submitted a series to a contest? The formula seems to take the form of, "look at how this now popular thing didn't meet the public on a technicality."
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Well, I know nothing about this subject, but all the hooks seem to meet the DYK criteria. I suggest going with ALT0 or ALT3 as they seem to be the nominator's choice. Relying on
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I guess that could work if it could be shortened (right now it's 206 characters when the guideline recommends a maximum of 200). But in any case, I think I still prefer my original hook since I don't really think it's necessary to state that a popular property is popular in a hook (see
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I'm not sure if your suggestion of changing "for a competition" to "to a competition" works in this case: although
Kawahara originally wrote the original draft as a contest entry, he never actually submitted it. Nevertheless, I've changed the hook wording. As
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Perhaps someone else can weigh in here, preferably with less knowledge of the series than I. I may be trying too hard to see past my bias of knowing that the series is popular when trying to estimate the experience for the average
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