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I welcome your advice. I was not rewriting the article lead as I have said earlier in the INC talk page that when you or some WP:India editors will get free time can rewrite the article lead. I just added the official founders of the party in the infobox and in the lead section. Thanks for providing
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There are a few small issues with the article I wanted to draw to your attention. Generally speaking text in the article's introduction (lede) does not require citations since this information must also appear in the body of the text where it is cited. I fixed a few easy examples of this which you
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I will keep providing you with the necessary information, write-ups, and sources. So that wouldn't be an issue on my side, and I can always keep reviewing the content and make minor tweaks. You will of course have credit for both these collabs. So that's not even a consideration. You may also use
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me the updated sources, I will replace the source. Because I'm new, I don't have the expertise unlike you in writing an article. If i have done any mistake please fix that for me. Again an experience editor like you I always welcome your advice. I will read WP:SS and WP:Lead fixation. Thanks--
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I would suggest transferring the content to the main article only when done with copy-editing all of the article. I have a whole draft in my second sandbox with a section wise redraft at my third sandbox. You can access them all at
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