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authority over Ashley is never contested as she obeys him throughout the entire game, Ada Wong is the femme fatale whose disobedience of patriarchy demands regulation. However, contrary to the conventions of noir cinema and in synch with Leon S. Kennedy’s incomplete hypermasculinity, Ada remains outside the ambit of the male protagonist’s authority
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Hey, I decided to withdraw it since 3 of them have opposed it and think it still has significant issues such as the "overuse of quotes and its synthesis" with their comment "between quotation and synthesis: there's a lot of voices but not really enough supporting material for the reader to make sense
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I have just edited the
Appearances section to address David's suggestions. Mainly, I have rephrased it so that it is written with a focus on Ada's role in each of her game appearances, with less of an emphasis on the chronology and timeline of the overarching Resident Evil series. Hope this helps and
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A FAC reviewer said this "Lead and first section mention Ada, but sort of suggest she was an anti-hero in the first game as well. The citation mentioning the name maybe clarifies that the name as just sort of tossed in without much reflection of what kind of character Ada was or would be at the time.
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Hey, are you down of sending this article to peer review? It seems that you are still improving until now after all :D. Thou, I am expecting that they would suggest us to remove the 2 TheGamer sources (hope we are able to find a better source or a book for her alias/pseudonym name), including ref 27.
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Firstly, the term "protagonist" is used multiple times in the FA Jill
Valentine because it clearly and succinctly reflects her roles in each of the games. Secondly, phrases like "meets the main character Leon" or "saves the main character Leon" sound somewhat awkward and unnatural for formal English
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Yeah, but I feel like based on Jill's article that could be very hard to rewrite for the article's flow. I guess the reception section is our only problem here. If you feel like the article is ready to be looked over again (not now, maybe in the fitire), let me know and we can start to open another
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Hi again! I've taken a look at David Fuchs' comments, and have made some changes in the "Concept and design" section to address them. I will say that I agree with David that the sentence "Ada once more assists Leon in
Resident Evil 4 (2005), but betrays him to steal a sample of a biological weapon
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Hi again! Thank you for all of your extensive edits on the article! I've made a minor edit to correct the prose of the lead section's third paragraph. Your rewrite of the reception section also looks good to me. I'll continue to ensure that the article has fluent and correct grammar - I understand
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Hello, I noticed that in the "GA Review" section of Ada Wong's talk page from 2023, the GA reviewer stated that her role as an antiheroine should be mentioned in both the lead and the "Concept and design section". I am therefore re-adding it to the article's opening paragraph. I hope this is okay
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The not-yet hypermasculinity of Leon S. Kennedy is also reflected in the game’s scripted narrative whose approach to gender is indebted to noir cinema. The game’s two main female characters, Ashley Graham and Ada Wong correspond to the submissive woman-femme fatale character couple. While Leon’s
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Hi! Sorry for the delayed reply. Sure, no worries at all. We can continue to improve the article based on the reviewers' suggestions for the time being. I guess what they're saying is that more context needs to be provided for the quotes in the
Reception section, as it is currently a series of
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Hi again! I noticed the changes that were made to the article regarding the replacement of the word "protagonist" with "the main character". I am just writing to let you know that I have restored certain uses of "protagonist", specifically in the lead and concept & design
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We got 1 oppose vote because they stated that her name that was mentioned at Re1 was unclear, in-universe at concept and design section, and was claimed that the appearances section spends more time chronological stuff and he finds it missing a lot of context.
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I've added genius intelligence and use of fear weapons, toxins, and chemicals to the infobox. And if you think they're unacceptable, I understand. I'm very sorry about making a few mistakes on it and I won't do it again. Please forgive
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I feel as though the subsequent sentence ("Ada and Leon's relationship is further explored and its minigame "Separate Ways", which features Ada as the playable character.") is already more than sufficient for the "Concept and design"
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I understand that this sentence is present because Ada's relationship with Leon is briefly touched on in each paragraph. But this particular sentence seems more like a plot detail/development rather than an extension of the Ada/Leon
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Echoing David's comments, I believe there isn't a need to mention Wesker at all in this section. As The
Organization and Derek Simmons are not mentioned in the preceding and subsequent paragraphs for RE2 and RE6. What do you
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Hi! The reference links seem to be working for me, so I'm not entirely sure what the reviewer is referring to either. Perhaps it's worth asking them to clarify a bit so their issue can be rectified?
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Hi. I'm very grateful to have you at that article. The major problem that we could have is I think only the reception section for the FAC and thegamer sources usage. Many thanks for your work! 🍕
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I was also hesistant with that, but just wanting your opinion with this to make sure. Thanks for the respond. I'll link your response to the FAC now here
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