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Thank you for your message. I've removed irrelevant, outdated, and wrong information with accurate and audited key facts and figures. The tone is informative, and it doesn't intend to market any product. Please let me know if you notice any sentence that might entail the unfair removal of the content
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Thanks so much!!!! I've tried to keep the same structure and only removed the incorrect information. Financial figures have been outdated since 2016, and so is the content. On the current page, even the company's name is erroneous, the same as the headquarter. How can I retrieve the version I've
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as I'm not an expert on such things though. Generally editors with a conflict of interest should propose changes on the article's talk page. The content you added is not lost, it still exists in the article's history. I removed it because it removed most the existing references, added a lot of
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No one seems willing to review my content so I would probably leave the page with wrong and outdated information. Too bad official sources are not taken seriously. Thank you for your help today. Have nice day. Lucie
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