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section. Also, the international section is missing citations and broad coverage of his other tournaments besides 2015 and 2016. This is just my opinion and you are free to ignore it, but I have a lot of experience with GA reviewing and submitting and these are my takes. If it makes you feel better,
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standard (and even of them, the first one is borderline at best), and they are not enough to establish notability, especially as they are both from the same publication. I'm
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about the refs. There should be very few refs in the lead, or none. However, I think the article is well-written and adjusted well to the comments.
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section (which covers three years) is just two sentences. This is definitely not showing broad coverage. The same can be said for the
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I didn't nominate an article to GA status until three months or so into officially editing (I did some IP work previously).
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when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Knowledge (XXG).
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has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:
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has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Superboilles was:
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has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheTechie was:
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