254:, I've gone ahead and reformatted this to remove those gray boxes (leaving everything else the same though). The major problem is that you're giving ways to decarcerate people, rather than simply stating facts. Remove phrases like "can be implemented by", "skyrocketing", and "crushed". Also, instead of section headers like "Overview of Decarceration Efforts", use "Overview of decarceration efforts" (only capitalizing the first letter). Add some internal links, and try to restate as little as possible. I'm happy to continue giving as much advice as I can, but I'm an inexperienced AfC reviewer, so I'll leave the final decision of when/if to promote to someone more experienced than I. Hope this helps.
769:, it's your custom to tag stale drafts an hour before they reach G13 eligibility? I hope this reflects your philosophy when you were a new editor and not currently. As we have discussed today over several talk pages, it is unwise to tag drafts too early. Some admins do not check tagged pages before they delete them, they assume they are tagged correctly. And I hope you change your essay to comply with common practice. Thank you.
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You were right, I was a little thin on the references. I added three additional secondary sources: 1) TWA – The
Building of an Airline, as revealed in the private collection of co-founder Paul Ernest Richter, Jr. 2) a 1929 article from Aviation Magazine 3) an article from the Experimental Aircraft
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You are tagging stale drafts CSD G13 before they are eligible. Check the edit history for the last edit. They are not eligible until they have been unedited for six months, not any sooner. Please do not be over-eager. It benefits no one to jump the gun. If a draft is eligible on Nov. 10, 2020 12:34
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I tried to include multiple sides of an argument (a world view) for those who oppose mass decarceration, those who oppose decriminalization of marijuana, those who oppose the abolition movement in general, those who oppose
Abolish ICE, etc.
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To be completely honest I'm not sure what happened. I was attempting to modify my own !vote to reflect further research I had done, I must have somehow removed that in the process. Feel free to undo it if you haven't already.
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Ok fair enough. I've already restored my vote. Rather than trying to undue your edit, which at this point may cause more problems, I would suggest you just go in and manually restore anything you unintentionally changed.
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No, I haven't considered it, for the simple reason that I don't believe I've heard of it before. But if it's considered to be a good idea to have one, I might as well set one up. Some help would be much appreciated.
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UTC do not tag it at Nov. 10, 2020 11:54 UTC. Being patient is better than having an admin coming to your talk page to scold you! There is no hurry to delete old drafts. We used to just do them all, once a day.
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Twinkle to also populate a CSD log page for your nominations (as an example, mine is at
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This article is naturally still a work in progress and evolving however the submission has been entirely revised into appropriate formatting and includes links to various independent reference points.
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Hello, when you say "totally unsourced" does it mean that a number of references and Book citations are irrelevant? In addition to secondary sources, let me get a second opinion as well.
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