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published a systematic review of 11 studies investigating social media use and depression among lesbian, gay, and bisexual (LGB) users that found that while qualitative research found that social media use could lead to greater social support and less loneliness for LGB users, LGB users were more
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before I move on to other diseases. I feel you regarding the paywalls; I don't have access to this articles either. On the other hand, utilizing accessible sources is crucial for ensuring that we provide transparent information and uphold basic scientific transparency standards, so this isn't
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Regarding to the biomedical context, I made sure that the information I inserted were up to date. That doesn't account for all signs and symptoms, as basic understanding hasn't changed in the near past which I made sure as well before rewriting the section. So there shouldn't be any sources
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likely to be cyberbullied than heterosexual users, that cyberbullying of LGB users was associated with depression among victims, and constant monitoring of accounts by LGB users was also found to be a stressor associated with depression."
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