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do you think - should I a) simply remove it altogether, or b) expand it to mention that Banks considered but rejected abandoning ship as it was too far and if he survived he'd be marooned, and that Cook thought of running the sinking ship onto the nearest island, then building something from her wreck that could maybe sail to Batavia. But neither option was very seriously considered, and then the fothering saved the day. Any suggestions?
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descriptions of symptoms include both diseases. I've gone with the references as they have the benefit of modern medicine in their identification. Malaria was almsot totallly unknown to the Royal Navy at the time, and there were no identified causes or cures for either condition in 1770. I think a longer dissertation on this in the article would be moving a little off-topic, but I'll put one in if you think it would add value.
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made a fairly quick recovery. By coincidence Cook's 1st lieutenant Zachary Hicks died of TB, which he'd had since leaving England but finally succumbed to after leaving Batavia. One source (Hough) says disease killed 50,000 people a year in Batavia, and Cook's log says "the unwholsome air of Batavia is the death of more Europeans that any other place upon the Globe."
213:"The Royal Naval Ensign in use at the time of Cook's first voyage of discovery" cannot be immediately verified by a non-expert who looks only at the image; better would be "Red flag with Union Jack covering the upper left quadrant". The word "circa" should be removed, as the image doesn't say "circa". The hyphen between the years should be an endash, as per 711:
Thanks for these. They're fair points, though I'm not an image expert and these two predate my work on this page so it'll take me a few days to work out how to fix them or if they should be replaced. With the second one, would that be addressed by ] editing the commons page to reaffirm his release of
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and the preceding hyphen section would be a good read. No hyphens after adverbial "ly"; I've fixed "full size"; and there are lots of ranges (day and page) in the Notes section that have hyphens rather than en dashes. Someone here (can't remember who) may very usefully run a bot to fix this aspect of
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Re the small map - there's an alternative one by Cook himself, though as it was a navigation chart rather than for amateur interest its not at all clearer. I've also found a 1790's map showing Cook's opath through the straits, but with so little frame of reference that its really just a line between
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Done, or at least improved. I used "Map:" to introduce the two map alt texts per the 5th example at WP:ALT (which uses "Diagram:"), but let me know if this should also be removed. It was a challenge with the map alt texts to balance information inclusion against verbosity - let me know if I got that
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I think the south pacific one is OK (the big one), but I can see the problem with the Torres Strait map. If I can find a good PD replacement I'll put it in, otherwise would you suggest one or both maps be removed and replaced with a more detailed text description of the voyage? I covered the Torres
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Thanks, though its an exciting topic so the really hard thing would be to make this article boring. I agree the "prospects are grim" bit is a statement of the obvious, though I think it leads well into the following sentence. Still, I've spent an hour or so trying to reword it without success. What
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This is an excellent article, informative and clear but also it importantly is an exciting article. Some of the insights from Cook's crew on certain events makes it a special account. I come from a family where the men had a long history of being sailors before 1900 and the article makes me want to
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Thanks to Dabomb87 who fixed the inconsistent date formatting in the online refs. Re the 1918 Advertiser reference listed above, Burdon and Bonython were the publishers, though an examiantion of the publisher text on the last page of that edition of the paper indicates they did business under the
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The larger map is marginally more legible. If no other reviewer sees it as a problem, leave it in. The second is more problematic, and doesn't really add to the value of the article. As the subject of the article is the ship, I think the Torres Strait journey is adequately covered by the text. My
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Added disease types mention and reference. Both Hough and Blainey suggest the deaths around this time were dysentery other than 1st Lt Hicks (TB) and ship's master Molyneaux (drunkenness), though many of the crew were already weakened by malaria. Cook and Banks just called it "the flux" and their
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The earliest deaths sound like dysentery and the later ones malaria, though the first to die was the ship's surgeon and after that no one kept any lasting medical records. Banks described it as an inflammation of the lungs accompanied by a violent fever and physical collapse. Cook got it too, but
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The alt text needs a bit of work. The alt text for the maps should give a bit more gist of what the maps tell the sighted reader, e.g., it should say which direction through the Torres straight, and what bodies of water were traversed other than the Torres straight and in what order. The alt text
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This article passed GA last year, was peer-reviewed in June and was granted MILHIST A-class status in July. After extensive recent tweaking I think it meets the criteria for a featured article. However as this is my first FA nomination I apologise in advance for any newbie errors. Any comments,
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Done. Was wrong about the French bit, the only source to discuss the perceived need for the guns refers to their use against hostile natives. This makes sense as they were small scale weaponry designed for anti-personnel combat. Have added their intended use to the text.
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in 1769-71."—I'd be inclined to follow WP:LINK and not link anglophone country-names, or if you really want to, to section-link to their history sections (those whole articles are too large and diffuse to be beneficial as links in this context). ("Australia" is linked
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two other lines. Per Brianboulton's comment above, I'd prefer to keep the current map for the (admittedly limited) value it adds, but if anyone else prefers its removal (or if Brian presses the point even mildly) I'll call that consensus and take it out.
1001:- Done, or at least improved. Replaced first point with "was beached on the mainland for seven weeks for rudimentary repairs to her hull." The two "for"'s in the sentence trouble me slightly, if they bother anyone else let me know and I'll reword again. 1049:
No problem. MeasuringWorth was founded by two professors of Economics, from UIC and Miami University respectively. Its advisory board has a host of academics from US and UK universities. The site has been accepted as reliable on many previous FACs.
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It's the official website of the De Delft shipyard where the replica docked, though I should have noted that it was in Dutch, sorry about that. However, I've removed the link altogether because a) it doesn't provide a unique resource per point 1 in
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The carpenter's quote contains nautical terms which won't be familiar to most readers, e.g. "main keep", midships", "larbord". It might be better to paraphrase what the carpenter said so that we can better understand the nature of the
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Final para, second sentence: there seems to be a disjunction between "shipworm" and "they". If "shipworm" refers to a condition (like for example woodworm), then I think "they" should be "it". Otherwise you should say "shipworms"
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General point: I'm uncertain about the value of the maps. The detail on each is mainly illegible, even when the maps are forced to their full size. On the "Track of Endeavour" map it is very difficult to find and follow
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Fourth paragraph begins "Despite this, the ship remained in very poor condition..." I'm not sure what "this" refers to; the last event recounted was the ship being struck by lightning. I think "Despite this" could be
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It would be useful to have present-day equivalent values for the ship's cost. I normally use MeasuringWorth.com; their calculation gives figures of £265,000 and £326,000 respectively for the two cost figures you
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Citations need some cleanup for consistent formatting (I left some sample edits, problems with dates and page numbers). Is one of these supposed to be an author? If so, author comes first in other citations
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I agree the carpenter's account adds flavour. Why don't you just add wiktionary links for "midships" and "larbord" (correctly, "larboard")? The main keep, one might reasonably deduce, is the ship's main hold.
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Last paragraph: can you say briefly why the ship carried armaments of this nature? Presumably they were in case of trouble in the unknown waters that were their destination; this could be clarified.
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Your opinion on this point is at odds with consensus, which is that OTRS is just fine, and there is no need for every image to offer publicly accessible proof that the license claimed is legitimate.
844:, which is less visually striking but perhaps more historically relevant. The Bayldon image narrowly fails PD-1996, but I've found an acceptable and much older alternative which I'll upload today. 182:; b) sufficient replica images are already in the article; c) most of the De Delft photos aren't that good; and d) a pet peeve - the photos show the replica with blue-painted upper works. The real 802:
is, unfortunately, in a deleted revision, and therefore accessible only to administrators. This still makes it far more accessible that our OTRS tickets, which are visible to even fewer people.
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further down, too, just before the more appropriate linking of Botany Bay, NSW".) And there are so many valuable links in that vicinity and the rest of the article that are better less diluted.
689:- The uploader does not seem to be the same as the author, so the uploader could not have released the rights to the photo. Could you contact the uploader and/or the author and sort this out? 1097:- will do tonight - there was something in one of the sources about protection from the French while near Europe and indigenous people in the Pacific, so I'll hunt that down and add it. 470:
it was an accident so he could abandon his crew and flee with the loot, but that's as close to an accidental scuttling I can think of. Anyway, done - redundant word removed.
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To keep Endeavour’s voyages and discoveries secret, Cook confiscated the log books and journals of all on board and ordered them to remain silent about where they had been
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sail the high seas like they did. Awesome. The only complaint is "The prospects if the ship sank were grim. ". I think that is stating the obvious and could be reworded...
992:"...she was forced to beach herself." I doubt this is literally true; should it not be "Cook was forced to beach her", or perhaps "the crew was forced to beach her"? 679:- This image is hosted on Commons, which means it has to be in the PD in both the US and NZ, therefore we need a tag explaining why this image is in the PD in the US. 985:: While I agree that this is a well-written and comprehensive account, and interesting, too, there are still a few minor points requiring attention. For instance:- 359:
to use an en dash for ranges; but not to use range punctuation where there's an introductory preposition. Thus, "from 1769 to 1791" ... is that the correct meaning?
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Strait-Batavia voyage only briefly because I'm trying to keep the focus on the ship as the aticle subject, rather than the voyage which is better covered
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Replaced Bayldon image with an Atkins from 1794. Hopefully this address the remaining query - feel free to let me know if there's more that needs doing.
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Outward voyage: "The voyage commenced with a landfall among the Madeira Islands." Surely the voyage commenced when they left Plymouth? Suggest reword.
1037:"Cook and his passengers" - there were passengers? I imagine that you are referring to the scientific team, so perhaps passengers isn't the right word. 676: 314:
On consideration I'd probably prefer to keep the "grim prospects" sentence as is, as I think it leads well into the rest of the paragraph, and is not
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You have to be an administrator to see that page (I can't view it, for example). Releases have to be as available to the public as we can make them.
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name "J.L. Bonython & Co." I've replaced the individuals with the company name in the reference. There is no stated author of the article.
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The citenews template not permitting the spelling out of "page", I have changed all the references to either "p." or "pp." for consistency. I
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Return voyage: On a pernickity point of geography, the voyage from Cape Town to England cannot really be described as "across" the Atlantic.
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the issues raised in this comment are now addressed, but if I've missed something please let me know and I'll have a look back through.
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OTRS is definitely not an ideal solution, I agree, but sometimes we have to resort to it. In this case, happily we do not.
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is a nice tool to use to locate a book quickly especially for those books that were pre-ISBN. You can look up your titles
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a statment of the obvious (shipwreck survival prospects sometimes being pretty good). Obviously, any other views welcome.
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But had they actually discovered any southern continent? It is indeed a strange sentence. The main text only says that
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Later service: "two tedious voyages" - suggest you remove the POV, or cite the description. ("routine" would suffice)
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Good point - I changed it to "lands." Hope this addresses the issue, but if I've missed the point please let me know.
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Yep, should have done that when you asked last time. Don't have the references on hand, so it'll be a little while.
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with one comment. You should utilize the |oclc= parameter in the cite cook template in your bibliography section.
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Suddenly, metrics come first, which is much more comfortable to me; but whichever way, they need to be consistent.
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Odd, I was sure I did that yesterday. Done now, let me know if you'd like something other than how it reads now.
510:. Well written and well sourced article. It, in my opinion, satisfies all FA criteria. I have only two comments: 339:. A fine nomination with an impressive standard of writing. (I haven't examined for the other criteria, though.) 217:. The phrases "Painting showing", "sketch", and "a sketch of" are unnecessary noise and should be removed (see 1327:
recommendation would be lose this map, though I won't oppose on this if you/other reviewers decide otherwise.
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balance wrong and I'll have another go. Lastly, sorry for the grammar errors - don't know how I missed those.
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Ref formatting looks good now (can hardly believe I failed to check it in my review; must be going soft).
1507: 1416:- I've given this a quick copyedit, but my changes were very minor. This is in excellent shape—well done. 1383: 1368: 1332: 1207: 1055: 1398: 840:
I confess I agree with Hesperian. However to resolve the issue I have replaced the John Hill image with
1485:. Frederick Britten Burden & John Langdon Bonython, Adelaide South Australia. 24 October 1918. p. 4 1154:
Done - replaced "Voyage commenced" with "The first port of call". Also expanded this section a little.
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Sources that are in languages other than English need to have that language noted in the reference (
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Comma required unless you mean the sheathing and caulking was to protect against a third deck, etc.
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is active. Hoever, if you would rather replace the image than contact him, that is fine.
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A joy to review. A few of the sentences rival Patrick White's descriptive narrative in
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I suppose, but would be an embarassment of epic proportions for a Royal Navy vessel.
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release the license by signing on the image description, that will fix the problem.
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Thanks, the new alt quite good and is well-balanced between brevity and verbosity.
1046:- Happy to do this, but how would I assert Measuringworth as a reliable source? 525:
I am very interested what disease killed a third of the crew? Is anything known?
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Otherwise, sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool.
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her crew sworn to secrecy about the southern continent they had discovered.
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Odd, must have died in the last day or so. Replaced with Beaglehole.
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We still need to have the author verify his relase of the rights at
522:. I think the sentence from the lead should be removed or rewritten. 39:
Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in
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Banks should be described and linked on first, not second mention
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No we don't. We have his explicit release in a deleted revision
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This is an outstanding article and easily meets the FA criteria
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Not sure I agree, but I've reworded the sentence to remove it.
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You did not change anything. I still see "southern continent".
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Can scuttling be anything but deliberate? Perhaps it can ...?
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the photo? If not, what should I do to address this?
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Can you add a note with information about diseases?
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http://www.dedelft.com/en/dockyard/2004/apr2004.html
1363:I hope to add my support when these are addressed. 1312:. But that's just my opinion, other views welcome. 876:I've now done that too, thanks for the suggestion. 798:. The claim must be highly visible, and it is. The 92:Featured article candidates/HMS Endeavour/archive1 1589:The above discussion is preserved as an archive. 965:Thanks, done. Never knew there was such a thing. 694:Looking forward to striking this objection soon. 41:Knowledge (XXG) talk:Featured article candidates 43:. No further edits should be made to this page. 741:File:Endeavour replica in Cooktown harbour.jpg 728:File:Endeavour replica in Cooktown harbour.jpg 687:File:Endeavour replica in Cooktown harbour.jpg 1595:No further edits should be made to this page. 466:once deliberately scuttled his flagship then 29:The following is an archived discussion of a 8: 18:Knowledge (XXG):Featured article candidates 96: 677:File:Endeavour, Bayldon, Francis J. B.jpg 1304:track, given the multiplicity of lines. 128:suggestions or criticisms are welcome. 99: 89: 488:- done, thanks for pointing this out. 670:- These issues should be easy to fix. 7: 154:) What makes this a reliable source? 790:There is a difference between the 220:WP:ALT #Flawed and better examples 24: 1237:- Done, changed to "shipworms." 1434:Current ref 54 is a dead link. 858:I would like to point out that 403:Notes sections ... 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Index

Knowledge (XXG):Featured article candidates
featured article nomination
Knowledge (XXG) talk:Featured article candidates
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HMS Endeavour
Euryalus
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Featured article candidates/HMS Endeavour/archive1
Analysis
Citation bot
External links
Euryalus
talk
12:27, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
http://www.dedelft.com/en/dockyard/2004/apr2004.html
Ealdgyth
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14:15, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
WP:ELNO
Euryalus
talk
23:49, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
WP:ENDASH
WP:ALT #Flawed and better examples
Eubulides
talk
17:29, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
Euryalus

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