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really written anything about the connection between the dissociative nature of this book and how many rape victims dissociate to cope with their trauma. That makes it really hard to describe in this article. There were times when other editors asked, "Now who are we talking about here"? and we worked at making it as clear as we could. There needed to be a distinction between the Maya character and the writer, and it was damned difficult. The popular media has a great deal of trouble with it. As someone in the mental health field, though, I find this whole thing very interesting. BJ, if you want to take a crack at better describing it, have a try. --
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have to say about the points made by those on the other side of this debate? Note that I have no opinion as to the merits of either side's argument, and I trust your editorial judgment when you say that it is an autobiography; however, as a layman on this subject, I was hoping to see some more words devoted to explaining the debate and why it's an autobiography, rather than just giving "it is an autobiography" as fact and leaving it there.
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him as a poet. Elsewhere, this article describes him as an "author" and a "writer". Is it correct to call him a poet, too? Also, Hilton Als is red-linked in the article, which is OK considering he's likely to be notable enough for a future article, but his name is used in the article twice before the red-link. The first usage should be the designated red-link. --
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I think it's a matter of interpretation. The use of the two voices causes a personal distance, which enables her to write about what's happened. To compromise, I added the phrase, "... in order to distance herself from the story" to the end of the sentence in question. Let me know what you think.
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characterized") in the lead; if the critical consensus is that it's an autobiography, I think it might be best to use a more specific wording ("prevailing critical view" or the like). The phrase also prompted me to look for a discussion on the autobiography v. autobiographical fiction debate in the
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I hate to say it, but I've been spoiled by those navigation boxes people place at the footer of some articles. Here's why: When I was done reading, I immediately wanted to find a list of her other autobiographies. There is no direct access to that list (that I saw) from this article. I had to click
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has also given it a solid review. The article has come a long way since its last FAC. I also believe that this article has the potential to be a valuable resource for students and readers of Angelou's works. The sources used are excellent. It is truly an example of one of Knowledge (XXG)'s best
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is an autobiography and not autobiographical fiction. The section seems to state that it's an autobiography as fact without really delving into the arguments of critics who believe this (for example, the second sentence: "Although Caged Bird is an autobiography, critic Mary Jane..."); what do they
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Re: "Although poet Hilton Als considers Caged Bird an important contribution to the increase of black feminist writings in the 1970s...". I've searched multiple references to Hilton Als and he is described as a journalist, an essayist, a writer and a critic, but I found no references that refer to
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is a difficult text to explain, as it is both autobiography and fiction, but I believe that this article clearly articulates the plot and its meanings to a reader who hasn't read the book (as I have not - gasp!). It is also well-illustrated and all of its images meet the requirements of our image
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in her writing. She's both the Maya character and the adult who's writing about her. In order to utilize the adult writer voice, she must distance herself, the writer, from the child. So I'm not really sure what you're asking me to do, or how to fulfill your concern. Unfortunately, no one's
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Hmm. I got a different impression when reading that paragraph. The paragraph seemed mainly to concentrate on why scholars might classify it as autobiographical fiction—that while it features the first-person narrative voice, it also contains elements of fiction, two distinct voices, and the
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I fixed it by deleting the last phrase of that sentence: "The public library is a "quiet refuge" to which Maya retreats when she experiences crisis". And thanks. The above mentioned "MemChu" article will probably be my next FA, and that's pretty different from this one and my first,
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I should have hedged a bit more in my original comment—I meant that I'm not entirely sure that her response in the interview ("It's damned difficult for me to preserve this distancing. But it's very necessary.") was about the struggle to draw a distinction between the two voices
169:(of which there is less than one might expect) and some of the popular media coverage. From these materials, Figureskatingfan has constructed a comprehensive article that covers the composition, publication, and reception of the text as well as its themes and styles. 351:"Critics have often judged Angelou's subsequent autobiographies "in light of the first", with Caged Bird receiving the highest praise." Please revise to eliminate the "with" connector and noun +ing construction. I played with a bit but couldn't settle on anything. 836:"Angelou reports that maintaining this distinction is "damned difficult", but "very necessary"." I don't think she is referring to the two voices in the book here. In the interview where this is taken from, she seems to be referring to the act of distancing 141:
I red-linked the first mention of Als, where he's called a "writer". Then I changed all other mentions to him to "Als". The instance you mention was actually the last time he's named in the article, which is now fixed. Thanks for the catch.
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is an autobiography, and why there's a controversy about it. It uses fiction-like elements, not just from novels, but from slave narratives. It also has a unique voice different than most autobiographies. This is stated in the text.
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I am nominating this article because it fulfills all the criteria for becoming a featured article. The 40th anniversary of the book's publication is this year, and it would be a great way for the Knowledge (XXG) community to honor
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being an autobiography. I also used Dr. Angelou's own words, in the Tate interview, that classify it that way. I figure if that's the way the author classifies it, that's the way it should be classified. I hope that's
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first-person singular representing the first-person plural. I don't see a summary of any scholarly arguments that counter these views. After reading the paragraph, and indeed the entire section, I find myself asking why
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Can't take the credit for this one! The problem is, though, I can't remember who taught it to me. Like Maria, I also have the memory of a goldfish. I want to say, though, that it was someone who's helped edit
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You're welcome, very glad to oblige. The answer to your question is, yes. My long-term WP goal is to not only create articles on all of Dr. Angelou's autobiographies, as I have already done with
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Okay, I changed the wording to satisfy your first request, but I'm not sure I agree with your second one. The second paragraph in the "Style" section does, I believe, adequately explain why
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article was doing, since Scartol asked me a while ago if I could re-review it, and I never got around to it because I'm a dweeb with no free time and a goldfish's capacity for memories, and
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with comments. This is a great read, thank you. Will you be working on her other autobiographies? I note that not all of them even have articles.
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By this token, I went through the article's references and made sure every page reference that could be linked is. Yes, it was a pain. --
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I changed a couple instances of "in order to" to "to" except where clarity might suffer. This is subjective so feel free to revert me.
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Okay, I see your point, so I pulled out my Lupton and used it to clarify the classification, and to summarize her arguments for
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I made a couple very tiny tweaks. One remaining sentence could use a fix for redundancy ("The public library is a
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Sorry, but I'm not sure I understand your distinction. The difficulty here is that Dr. Angelou's being somewhat
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Style and genre section, and an argument as to why the former was "best", but I didn't see one clearly laid out.
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There are instances of book refs which have multiple pages, which should be formatted as "pp." not
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The following refs are duplicated, and appear in the ref section as such, use a ref name instead.
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Fixed, I'm pretty sure. This could use an extra set of eyes to make sure.
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Otherwise, sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool.
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Changed to: "...and Caged Bird generally receives the highest praise."
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and added. (I made it auto-collapse so as to be less obtrusive.)
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Dabs and external links are up to speed using the checker tools.
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Oh, now you're just bragging! And in French, no less! ;) --
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for GAC (currently on hold), and that got me wondering how
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I'll be happy to make one of these. Gimme a day or two.
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Singin' and Dancin' and Gettin' Merry Like Christmas
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Index

Knowledge (XXG):Featured article candidates
featured article nomination
Knowledge (XXG) talk:Featured article candidates
SandyGeorgia

I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings
Figureskatingfan
previous FAC
Maya Angelou
Scartol
Awadewit
Moni3
Figureskatingfan
talk
05:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
Michael Devore
talk
08:11, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
Figureskatingfan
talk
13:57, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
Figureskatingfan
Awadewit
talk
10:21, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
Figureskatingfan
talk
15:52, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
Moni3
talk

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