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I wasn't aware no libraries in the US have those books, too bad they are out of print or I'd put in a request that we would acquire them. The Great Naval Game: Britain and
Germany in the Age of Empire By Jan Rüger was the other book which is in english and has some of the details, but none for Posen.
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