3219:"Architectural writer Ada Louise Huxtable called the tax a beginning of the city's "architectural annihilation". She believed the higher tax assessment was a "special method of taxing architectural excellence"." Can be combined: "Architectural writer Ada Louise Huxtable called the tax a beginning of the city's "architectural annihilation", believing the higher tax assessment was a "special method of taxing architectural excellence"."
107:, the daughter of Seagram's CEO at the time, who pushed for the building to be a New York City landmark in the 1970s and 1980s, and who even today maintains a connection with the building, over 60 years after its completion. It's been called one of "New York's most copied buildings" and, even before it became an official New York City landmark in 1989, had a large influence on other International style buildings.
1738:, "For inflating capital expenses, government expenses, or the personal wealth and expenditure of the rich, the US-GDP or UK-GDP indexes should be used." Generally, the CPI is only useful for everyday goods and other small expenses, e.g. gas prices, groceries. All the figures used here are large expenses rather than everyday expenditures. Accordingly, I used the footnote for inflating US-GDP values. –
2294:"at their perimeters forming an arcade"-- suggest adding a comma between "perimeters" and "forming." I suppose you're implying that "ends of the slab overhang the plaza" + "supported by bronze-clad columns" = "an arcade in front of the entrance". Now, without the comma, it feels like "ends of the slab overhang the plaza and are supported by bronze-clad columns
3410:. Overall I love the prose, they are moving and simple enough for readers not fond of architecture to understand. And yeah, avoiding definite articles are definitely a hard thing to navigate around, which is why I made that a trivial point, though I saw potential in changing it. The images are good enough and it looks pretty comprehensive-- well done!
3387:, thanks. I have done that and also tried to get rid of that particular repetition of the definite article ("The"). However, the inclusion of the definite article at the beginning of a sentence is sometimes unavoidable, since it almost always comes before the building's name (i.e. "the Seagram Building"). –
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kind without approval, but many landlords still fight proposed NRHP designations.In any case, the responsibility of applying for NRHP status typically falls to the owner, preservation groups, historical societies, or government agencies. Furthermore, the property owner (in this case, 375 Park Avenue.
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designation. (It's mentioned in the article explicitly for the NYC Landmark designation, but this is also true of
National Register of Historic Places listings.) Landmark statuses generally make it harder for landlords to make improvements to their properties. An NRHP listing is less restrictive than
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the first floor. An
American second floor is commonly known in other parts of the world as a first floor. Here, the situation is more complicated, as the site slopes down. The "ground floor" being referred to here is almost one story below the lobby. The "first floor" is a few steps above the lobby.
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But surely property owners have an interest in applying for a designation, right? I mean I wouldn't expect "375 Park Avenue. L. P. c/o RFR Holding LLC" to apply just for the kicks of it. In any case, I think it should be fine for basic factual claims about the building (which seems to be the way you
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I clarified this a little. Mies was basically told that he would not be constrained by cost (i.e. when he was planning the building, he was not told that he had to design a structure that cost at most $ X). Regarding the three cost estimates, these were not budgets per se. The initial estimate was $
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Ludwig Mies van der Rohe, Philip
Johnson, Ely Jacques Kahn, and Robert Allan Jacobs designed the building, - I feel like we are reading a load of names, and then later find out why they were important. Could we say "Designed by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe, Philip Johnson, Ely Jacques Kahn, and Robert
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Sadly, the owner is one of these people who considers a public lobby to be a private space (it's not in the article, but this is his reputation in NYC real-estate circles). I can try to walk into the lobby and take pictures, but the owner might have me thrown out even if I were visiting someone on
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That's all I can find for the 21st century sub, and those are all the points I have for this article. I do have a concern of the repetition of "The" as a starting sentence, at "The building was 99.5 percent occupied, but only six original tenants remained. The following year, the
Seagram Company
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Thanks for the review. Yeah I agree it's pretty terrible. :D In any case, I've addressed all the issues you raised, except for the last one (for now). The text does say that "Mies reused the building's design for towers in
Toronto", in Canada, but I haven't yet found reliable sources for other
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of the GOCE, though he unfortunately passed away not long after he copyedited this page. I think it's up to FA quality now, and I look forward to all comments and feedback. While the previous nomination was archived due to lack of commentary, I hope that isn't the case this time around.
2621:"The Lobster Club's main dining room has brightly colored furniture and upholstery; 150 drip-painted concrete floor tiles by artist Laura Bergman; and three bronze-partitioned booths on the south wall." Similar to the semicolon question above. Also, ref 112 should be first.
2433:"The western part of the lobby has three bronze revolving doors and is interrupted by two bronze columns. The central section comprises three corridors connecting the western and eastern thirds of the lobby, within four elevator and stair enclosures"-- duplicate ref 86s.
2047:* I generally try and make hatnote descriptions as short as possible. Here, in "For the structure in Niagara Falls that was originally named Seagram Tower", "that was" can be easily dropped; I've seen similar hatnotes on other articles and they don't have the "that was".
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Yes, it is a high-quality source. Even though it was prepared for the purpose of the landmark designation, I don't think this is controversial because it was merely written for the purpose of preservation, rather than for profit or some ulterior motive. The articles on
2919:"by William Pereira and Charles Luckman of Pereira & Luckman"-- suggest changing to "by William Pereira and Charles Luckman of the company Pereira & Luckman", as for visually-impaired readers, it might sound like a confusing repetition of the two's surnames.
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The issue is that New York City does not give out architecture licenses, only New York state. The use of "New York" alone, without "state", may be imprecise as a result. By contrast, in other parts of the text where "New York" alone is used, the context is clearer.
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The 'Design' section says that there was no budget for the building, the 'History' section puts the initial budget at $ 15 million and the final budget at $ 20 million, but it's later state that the total cost of the project was $ 43 million. This seems confusing.
2414:"The lobby, designed as if it were an extension of the plaza, is divided into three parts"-- pretty weird connectors there. Suggest "The lobby was designed as if it were an extension of the plaza, and is divided into three parts" which for me sounds more natural.
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There are some inconsistencies with respect to the citation of newspapers/magazines with a volume number (such as
Architectural Record). Sometimes, you mention the date, sometimes the issue number, sometimes both. Preferably, I would mention both.
646:, but I will also comment on anything that could be improved. I'll post up some comments below over the next couple days, which you should either respond to, or ask me questions on issues you are unsure of. I'll be claiming points towards the
3035:"Upon Bronfman's suggestion, the architects specified that the tower would be made of bronze and glass, Mies moved to a nearby apartment to oversee the Seagram Building's development"-- did you intend to use a full stop after "glass"?
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are using it, but I'll quickly double-check). However, I think the author should be more clearly labeled (i.e. Higgins & Quasebarth) because as of right now, one could think that the author of the doc is the
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International-style skyscraper in Manhattan, New York City, erected in the 1950s. As the name suggests, the building was erected for the Seagram Company and designed by several architects, most notably
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I have reservations about this. The word "located" (used in a context like this) is almost always redundant if you already have a locative word like "at". I can still add "located" if you think it would be better for the article.
807:"a prominent instance of corporate modern architecture" - can this be tweaked to something more specific? It's quite vague and uninteresting, when the material in the body of the article explains the significance of the building.
3314:"For decades after the sale, Phyllis Lambert"-- drop the "Phyllis". Additionally, at "Planning" paragraph 2, "Bronfman's 27-year-old daughter, Phyllis Lambert" can be changed to "Lambert, who was Bronfman's 27-year-old daughter"
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The space was not fully rented. Common practice in the real estate industry is to refer to a building as partially rented (rather than the building's space). Though, I suppose it could be made more clear, so I've done that.
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moved its headquarters out of the building. The
Seagram Building continued to be held by Rosen's RFR Holding.", however I feel like it's unchangable so it's fine. If all comments are resolved I'll strike and support.
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I would remove the New York Times ISSN number: not only does it create an inconsistency with other publications, it also creates an inconsistency in-between NYT citations, since some mention the ISSN and some don't.
959:"According to the New York City Department of City Planning, the building has 849,014 square feet (78,876.0 m2) of interior floor space" - is the first half of this sentence needed? (do other measurements exist?)
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You often interchange "Architectural Forum" and "Architectural Forum magazine". Suggest consistency with the former; if the latter is chosen, then other publications need to be suffixed with the media type too.
845:"The Teachers Insurance and Annuity Association of America purchased the building in 1979, but it remained Seagram's headquarters until 2001" - do we need the 'but'? Lots of companies rent their headquarters.
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Where to begin uh... good building? Nice architecture... the blacks are amazing though, blends in with the modern surroundings. Location kinda awkward I guess... looks significant. Anyways, comments it is.
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Building-NewYork-4.jpg – The caption (Looking from Park Avenue into the (building) lobby at night) could be the alt. Suggest caption instead to be: Night view of the building lobby and facade.
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Usually these are used for serial lists (in the A, B, and C format) in which one or more items themselves have commas. However, none of these have commas, so I've removed them and reworded the sentence.
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Yeah but that's what I thought too -- I guess I'm still confused about who applied for the designation and why... Anyway, doesn't really matter, I'll just double-check the use and it should be fine.
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This nomination has now received several prose supports, as well as a source review and an image review. Do I need to do anything else for this nomination, or should I just wait? Thanks in advance.
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This is a big one, so not sure if you'll agree: what do you think of turning the New York Times refs that are done via Proquest to refs that point to the New York Times website? Proquest is only
469:, I've fixed all of these (I assume you mean #Site for your second and third points). Lever House was a SOM design, so I removed that detail. The Lobster Club was redesigned by Marino in 2017.
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How relevant exactly is the Lever House here? Were they designed by the same people? Its only prior appearance in the article is in #Design, in the 'list of things near this building' section.
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I actually reworded the sentence before I saw your comment. Now, it reads as two sentences: "The lobby is designed as if it were an extension of the plaza... It is divided into three parts".
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I'm wondering of, in this article, what you consider the 'number limit.' Usually for me, for numbers ten or higher I would use digits. Here you have 3.75 ft in digits, but "forty" in text.
2783:"like the Time–Life Building at 1271 Avenue of the Americas"-- why isn't the link at the "1271 Avenue of the Americas" part, considering the link at "Time-Life Building" is just a pipe to
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Unlike Lever House's mullions, which General Bronze also manufactured, the Seagram Building's mullions are only for aesthetics and are thus susceptible to thermal expansion or contraction.
3139:"to celebrate the 13th anniversary of the founding of the United Nations." If it's an anniversary I think readers already know what it's commemorating, so "the founding of" is removable.
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I have removed this. There do exist other measurements, but the city government's measurement is the most authoritative, while others are merely approximate (e.g. 850,000 square feet).
3257:"The same year, Seagram's president Edgar Bronfman Sr., Samuel Bronfman's son"-- "Samuel" can be dropped as the full name has been said earlier. Same case with "History", paragraph 1
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also use designation reports as sources. (If the same source had been written for commercial purposes, on the other hand, I might have doubts about the reliability of the source.) –
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My architect sister dragged me to see this building during a visit from Australia to NYC in 2009, so it's interesting to learn about it. I'd like to offer the following comments:
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Fixed. "Standing", in the context of traffic, is commonly used in NYC to refer to idling, but I didn't consider the other possible uses of this term until you pointed it out.
2276:. I think I wrote it as "40", which is the correct way, but again this was changed. "3.75" is also correct unless I were to manually write out "three and three-quarters".
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copied for other structures worldwide. - the prose says this again, but doesn't give any examples outside of the United States (or so I could find on a skim) Best Wishes,
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For these two, I fixed it by rewording the sentence. It took almost two decades for the plan to come to fruition, for reasons that aren't disclosed in the sources I read.
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It should not. The retaining wall is low and is made of granite. If it is hyphenated, then that would indicate the retaining wall retains granite, which it does not do.
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Good question. It's not really used as a reference for stuff in the article itself (just for the inflation footnotes), but it's also not an explanatory footnote either.
2938:"The building was projected to be complete in 1957 for the 100th anniversary of Seagram's founding." Isn't this a repetition of from the paragraph above "Development"?
3073:"Because of a no-standing rule implemented"-- why not just use "idling", per the linked article? I initially got confused on "standing" before hovering over the link.
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98 The sources seem to place the restaurant on the ground floor and first floor, but perhaps there’s some transposing of architectural lingo that I don’t understand?
2579:"containing metal curtains that rippled from air released by hidden ventilating ducts." why is "rippled", as in past tense? Or an I not understanding the sentence?
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Park Avenue from 64th Street to Grand Central Terminal - panoramio (34).jpg – ALT instead could be: The plaza with a fountain facing the building at southeast
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1094:" However, the Seagram Building was specifically cited as an influence on the 1961 zoning code" - this sentence seems to repeat the first one in the para
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Tell me if I'm missing something but it seems like this page advises referencing the Fed's consumer price index, and that MeasuringWorth is for the GDP.
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As there are only two examples, the semicolon would make the second half of the sentence a run-on, rather than an element with commas in a serial list.
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I don't think the "state" is needed in "New York state", as it'll be either "New York" or "New York City"; in some places you don't use this word too.
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The Seagram Building was never officially named for its original anchor tenant, Canadian conglomerate Seagram, and is legally known as 375 Park Avenue.
1056:"The Seagram Building has received both praise and awards" - this is a bit clunky after a section noting some of the praise the building has recieved
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File:Park Avenue from 64th Street to Grand Central Terminal - panoramio (34).jpg and File:Seagram Building-NewYork-4.jpg can be shifted to the right.
3276:"but the city took no action on the proposal." But did the LPC responded in any way? If no, suggest trimming this down to "but no action was taken."
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but that was a long time ago, and rarely do I encounter this situation, so I must've forgotten about it, sorry. Anyways moving on to the history :)
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Following the 1933 repeal of Prohibition in the United States, Seagram Distiller's CEO Samuel Bronfman was planning a large Manhattan headquarters.
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I wonder if this image (File:Seagrambuilding.JPG) can be further touched up to remove a fragment of roof at the top left hand corner of the photo?
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Seagram Building (35098307116).jpg – Should have an alt (e.g. A tall glass building between two other buildings) and also a caption in the infobox
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That sounds reasonable. I thought CCTV was common enough that it would be abbreviated nearly all the time (like the abbreviation for TV itself).
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I'm not even sure why the video box was there. I've removed that now, since it doesn't really add any information that isn't already mentioned.
2640:"The office suites generally have a flexible plan, The flexibility of the office stories"-- so is it the suites or stories that are flexible?
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File:Seagram Building (6268045534).jpg, File:Four-seasons-ny.jpg – Captions are descriptive enough (similar for others with "refer to caption")
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Most of the ALT descriptions are quite lacking in detail, with only the bare minimum used (just with "refer to caption"). To further elaborate.
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I have formatted them consistently now. All the news sources that have available ISSNs received them; this is similar to my approach on the
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2492:"with travertine walls and floors; cement ceilings with gray-glass mosaic tiles; and bronze engaged piers." Why are they in semicolons?
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I suggest just using the bullet point for the external video, since with that template, a weird space is formed-- at least, on desktop.
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explains this better: "ox-type templates they result in a long sequence of right-aligned boxes hanging off the bottom of the article"
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15M and the final estimate was $ 20M, and both of these estimates were made before construction had started. The final cost was $ 43M.
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3295:"mandated the new owner preserve"-- change to either "mandated that the new owner preserve" or "mandated the new owner to preserve"
1223:, thanks for the offer. Vami and Nick-D have now given their support to the nomination, if you are still interested in reviewing. –
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I've added a longer quote. "Happy to come back" was indeed in the original quote but I forgot to put it in the quotation marks.
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Then perhaps it would be great to note this: "Sources disagree on whether the rooms had a maximum capacity of 400 or 485."
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Done. I initially thought the architectural style should be capitalized, but modernism is really just an umbrella term.
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More later. Apologies for the long interval -- school is seriously messing with me, but I'll try to finish this review.
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L. P.) is always listed on NRHP applications where possible. I'll fix the author name in the short footnotes, though. –
2880:"though this plan was not executed for almost two decades." Is there a more specific number than "almost two decades"?
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I'll begin a review of this article very soon! My reviews tend to focus on prose and MOS issues, especially on the
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2684:"apex" isn't an analogical or metaphoric phrase that it needs to be quoted; you can paraphrase it to "pinnacle"
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3100:"By July 1958, the Seagram Building was 90 percent rented." How is a building partially rented, if I may ask?
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3238:"There was still high demand for office space in Midtown"-- add "Manhattan", per your other mentions of MM.
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1879:, I was wondering if you felt in a position to either pass or fail this source review yet? Thanks.
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I did something similar, but there were 3 plans and the 5x3 bay plan was the third one.
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I see I see. Pass for this comment then. Will be moving to the prose tomorrow : )
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with the aim, if I understand correctly, of getting a historic designation?
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is one of those institutions that does give access to the NYT on ProQuest.)
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The second dining room is a private dining room with white partition walls,
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After a 2017 renovation, the Lobster Club contains a design by Peter Marino.
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and was copyedited through the GOCE a few months ago. I am very grateful to
2598:"redesigned it from 1995 to 1999 after a fire damaged it." Repetitive verb+
1554:, p. 3-19 a high-quality source? It appears like it has been prepared by a
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Sadly, the only time frame I can find is some time between 1933 and 1951.
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I just realized that these were never formally defined. I've done so now.
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for image review. Also no archival photos of the building's construction?
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I think you missed Stern Mellins & Fishman and Jordy 1976 (ref 249).
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structures around the world that were inspired by the Seagram Building.
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3333:"second restaurant interior"-- you mean "second interior restaurant"?
2210:"A "spine" with"-- why is this "spine" not defined? And the "bustle".
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Please ping me when you have received one or two additional supports.
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Can ' International style' be linked? If not, it should be explained.
3358:"for $ 375 million; he completed his purchase that December." --: -->
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For "Design influence" section you can probably add an image of the
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NYC Landmark designation, as the latter prohibits major changes of
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When was the Seagram Building nominated for inclusion on the NRHP?
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That is a lot of time to plan! What did Seagram do with that time?
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Could we do away with the Chilean Development Corporation source?
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Either add the location parameter for every book or leave it out.
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The LPC declined the action, but I have changed the text anyway.
864:"and became known as an unofficial landmark" - needlessly clunky
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Ehh, not really. I've removed the unnecessary refs for these.
2900:"whose opening was to coincide with the company's centenary"
3015:"Ultimately, Mies selected the 5-by-3-bay rectangle" --: -->
2899:"and he wanted to celebrate the company's centenary" --: -->
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Good point, I don't know why it was there. I've changed it.
3359:"for $ 375 million, completing his purchase that December."
2339:"At the time, American building codes"-- should we link to
1534:, thanks. I have now addressed all of your above comments.
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Either add the OCLC number for every book or leave it out.
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3336:The second interior of a restaurant, the first was
1463:whereas a NYT subscription is available to anyone.
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This sentence seems to me a better fit for #Design.
2532:"The rooms had a maximum capacity of 400 or 485."
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3527:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
3428:Thanks. I really appreciate the detailed review.
1353:Some publishers that could be wikilinked aren't.
1828:I clarified this now and hope this makes sense.
597:Thanks. I have addressed the issues you raised.
103:. This building's development was influenced by
256:Done. I will try to get better images, though.
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1241:Thanks! I'll do it over the next week or so.
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1823:Typically, in the U.S., the ground floor
1511:Will do a second pass later or tomorrow.
776:, any more to come on this? Just asking.
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2941:It is. I've combined the two mentions.
1801:cited. Therefore I've removed it here.
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2472:No problem. I appreciate the comments
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686:mullions should be ]s. Best Wishes,
673:Maybe link "distiller" Best Wishes,
2540:? Considering there are two rooms.
1694:That is what I am currently doing.
1794:56. Does the source say "custom"?
1059:I have reworded this section now.
432:Double quotation marks, no period.
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438:What design? The 2017 renovation?
2687:Done, but slightly differently.
1461:accessible through institutions
660:Allan Jacobs...." Best Wishes,
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1331:Oops. I fixed these now.
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3530:Please do not modify it.
2582:Fixed to present tense.
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3446:Question from nominator
2027:Resolved comments from
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905:I have clarified this.
611:Cool beans. Content to
3298:Done (the first one).
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1579:Surrogate's Courthouse
1019:I added some context.
294:Union Carbide Building
1696:Template:Inflation/fn
1468:The Knowledge Library
1078:I've clarified this.
943:I've fixed this now.
724:Terrible article. :P.
318:That's all for now.--
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250:Other image issues:
1424:Done now, I think.
731:my nominations list
719:Additional comments
573:Reading complete. –
394:Reserving a spot. –
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3160:Mesoamerican
2855:
2838:Gog the Mild
2834:MOS:NUMNOTES
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2070:MOS:ELLAYOUT
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1912:Gog the Mild
1881:Gog the Mild
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184:ALT issues:
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3162:be linked?
2643:The office
2346:As well as
2296:that formed
2274:MOS:NUMERAL
1780:Spot checks
635:Support by
3465:Epicgenius
3430:Epicgenius
3389:Epicgenius
3342:Epicgenius
3319:Epicgenius
3300:Epicgenius
3281:Epicgenius
3262:Epicgenius
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3205:Epicgenius
3186:Epicgenius
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3144:Epicgenius
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3106:Epicgenius
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3059:Epicgenius
3040:Epicgenius
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2962:Epicgenius
2943:Epicgenius
2924:Epicgenius
2905:Epicgenius
2885:Epicgenius
2812:Epicgenius
2792:Epicgenius
2769:Epicgenius
2750:Epicgenius
2731:Epicgenius
2709:Epicgenius
2689:Epicgenius
2670:Epicgenius
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2626:Epicgenius
2607:Epicgenius
2584:Epicgenius
2545:Epicgenius
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2478:Epicgenius
2438:Epicgenius
2419:Epicgenius
2400:Epicgenius
2381:Epicgenius
2354:Epicgenius
2323:Epicgenius
2303:Epicgenius
2278:Epicgenius
2255:Epicgenius
2236:Epicgenius
2215:Epicgenius
2196:Epicgenius
2177:Epicgenius
2158:Epicgenius
2116:Epicgenius
2097:Epicgenius
2077:Epicgenius
2054:Epicgenius
1986:Epicgenius
1916:Epicgenius
1898:Epicgenius
1830:Epicgenius
1803:Epicgenius
1740:Epicgenius
1700:Epicgenius
1634:Epicgenius
1587:Epicgenius
1536:Epicgenius
1472:Epicgenius
1445:Epicgenius
1426:Epicgenius
1382:Epicgenius
1358:Epicgenius
1333:Epicgenius
1293:Epicgenius
1274:Epicgenius
1272:Done now.
1239:Epicgenius
1225:Epicgenius
1196:Epicgenius
1156:Epicgenius
1135:Epicgenius
1110:Epicgenius
1080:Epicgenius
1061:Epicgenius
1042:Epicgenius
1021:Epicgenius
1002:Epicgenius
983:Epicgenius
964:Epicgenius
945:Epicgenius
926:Epicgenius
907:Epicgenius
888:Epicgenius
869:Epicgenius
850:Epicgenius
831:Epicgenius
812:Epicgenius
758:Epicgenius
599:Epicgenius
558:Epicgenius
539:Epicgenius
517:Epicgenius
471:Epicgenius
374:Epicgenius
342:Epicgenius
301:Epicgenius
278:Epicgenius
258:Epicgenius
231:Epicgenius
211:Epicgenius
192:Epicgenius
154:Epicgenius
121:Epicgenius
83:Epicgenius
3487:WP:FAC/ar
3483:candidate
3184:Removed.
2436:Removed.
2175:Removed.
1380:article.
1291:Removed.
1108:Removed.
867:Removed.
3481:: This
2832:Indeed.
1947:Comments
1853:201a OK
360:ZKang123
354:Alright
336:ZKang123
320:ZKang123
171:ZKang123
136:ZKang123
50:promoted
3408:Support
3158:Should
3057:Fixed.
2645:stories
2624:Fixed.
2605:Fixed.
2348:trusses
2194:Fixed.
1926:JBchrch
1894:JBchrch
1877:JBchrch
1857:JBchrch
1756:JBchrch
1732:JBchrch
1716:JBchrch
1680:JBchrch
1650:JBchrch
1624:against
1620:JBchrch
1604:JBchrch
1562:JBchrch
1532:JBchrch
1515:JBchrch
1492:JBchrch
1402:JBchrch
1356:Fixed.
1317:JBchrch
1245:JBchrch
1221:JBchrch
1204:JBchrch
1172:Support
981:Fixed.
829:Fixed.
648:wikicup
613:support
593:Vami IV
556:Added.
465:Thanks
3515:buidhe
3414:Gerald
3368:Gerald
3317:Done.
3260:Done.
3241:Done.
3222:Done.
3165:Done.
3142:Done.
3123:Done.
2922:Done.
2903:Done.
2858:Gerald
2790:Done.
2748:Done.
2729:Done.
2707:Done.
2561:Gerald
2514:Gerald
2457:Gerald
2374:WP:IAR
2321:Done.
2301:Done.
2132:Gerald
2095:Done.
2052:Done.
2031:Gerald
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