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My biggest gripe is actually the lead. It's not a massively long article, but I feel it should have at least two paragraphs, but I also get the impression the lead isn't actually as well written as the rest of the article. I know I've done the same thing. You have repetition (fungus, cap) and it
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mushroom that has had its global distribution greatly expanded by the activity of man—hitching on the roots of pine trees headed for exotic plantations. Despite its sliminess, the mushroom is considered a decent
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I've mentioned the sliminess in the description section now, and indicated in the microscopic characterisitc that the gelatinous hyphae contribute to the sliminess.
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that are an essential dietary requirement for all mammals."—this is uncited, and according to our article, not all omega-6 FAs are essential, only linoleic acid.
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Not the most exciting mushroom, but, as usual, a fine article. I'd be happy to support once you've fixed up these bits and bobs.
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Frost to the synonyms list since it's the basionym, and mentioned the authority for the senior homonym. Is this what you meant?
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by not having a cottony roll of velar tissue (derived from a partial veil) at the margin when young."—I guess the
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I removed "when young"; reviewing the literature, I didn't find any indication they change color when mature.
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I was able to find this article online, and have confirmed that it was introduced in a pine plantation.
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The slimyness of the cap isn't actually discussed anywhere, as far as I can see. What is the slime?
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